"morning Haze"

as solar does peep through the tree fork, I see the early morning haze For: Nature’s Breath By: Raul Moreno

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Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 5/1/2010 4:45:00 AM

Great write in describing the beauty of morning haze through your Haiku. Thanks. And many thanks for your precious comments on my poem on blue wing bird Neelkanth. Goo luck and my best wishes for the contest. Love and best wishes...xx Ravindra ...xxx.. John Freeman

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/29/2010 7:17:00 AM

and it sure is beautiful :) I could just close my eyes and envision that morning haze :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/28/2010 9:53:00 AM

Great write ...I haven't seen the picture so I can't relate it to that but I can see a picture in my mind from your words..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Glad that you got a spiritual meaning from it...Sara

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/27/2010 8:34:00 AM

Hey Bro! Thx again, for your kind comments left on my write! You know it's always appreciated! ....Jimmy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2010 9:25:00 PM

Hey, so you caught my lucky number five there, huh? I noticed that little peep of the sun thru the tree fork and was wondering if anyone would focus on that, and you DID. LUv, andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/26/2010 1:09:00 PM

enjoyed today--

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/25/2010 8:23:00 PM

Great Haiku, Moses. Should do well on the contest. Good luck and best wishes, Caroline.

Skat A

Date: 4/25/2010 6:37:00 PM

Good luck in the contest enjoyed the contest,,Irma