Morning Has Broken - Sonnet For My Mom

Early this morning, the song of blackbirds
quell the swell of silence enfolded by night.
Dim light on a distant ridge: the sun returns,
freed from Atlantis, drenched in the cloak of life.
Soft dew-drop showers dapple the dusty 
garden with pops of pastels like lavender,
lilac, tea rose and pink, from clouds that carry
cleansing tears of a newborn’s young mother, 
the potter protective her infant clay.
She picks up her child, a fragile bowl, chipped,
frail from thirty years spent running away,
now run aground as a twice sunken ship.
Her hands keep a promise, one quietly spoken,
made long ago when morning had broken. 


- For my mother who sang me Cat Stevens'
   Morning has Broken the day 
   I was born.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/3/2017 10:13:00 AM
Great song and great dedication, loved the personification of child and clay. Mothers do have a way of easing life's pain, and reshaping us, with their comforting words. I enjoyed this sonnet immensely! You are so talented Phillip, I rarely attempt a sonnet!
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Date: 5/22/2017 10:01:00 AM
This is a lovely sonnet tribute for your mother, Phillip:)
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Date: 5/17/2017 7:58:00 PM
OMG this is beautiful Phillip! What a precious gift for Mother's Day! That song is my favorite to play on piano, and one of the first I learned to play. You have honored your mother in a way that she will treasure forever. And I can tell you are her gift. A definite Fave. I love how you have composed this! 7++ ; )
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 5/17/2017 8:56:00 PM
Thank you, Connie, I very much appreciate it. It was a difficult poem to write because I wanted it to be spoken clearly and also be lyrical, which is tough for me. Hope you had a wonderful mother's day! :)
Date: 5/15/2017 1:15:00 AM
"Morning has broken like the first morning - blackbird has spoken like the first bird" It is absolutely beautiful my friend. Your mom must be really happy with your sonnet. I love it.
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Date: 5/14/2017 4:52:00 PM
Aww Phillips this is beautiful and one of my fave songs too - have got it down as one of my funeral songs! Love the keyboard by Rick Wakeman:-) I am sure your mum was delighted you wrote this lovely poem for her and wish her a Happy Mother's day from me:-) To really make her day ditch the beard if you've not done it already!!!!:-0 hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2017 1:44:00 PM
oh wow well done Phillip I sure missed the removal of the fuzz ceremony!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 5/14/2017 4:55:00 PM
I shaved months ago - you missed it! I didn't give this to mom yet. No poems 'til she finishes cooking my dinner
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