Morning Hair

I don't know why, You may think i'm weird, but the sexiest thing I can think of, has to be morning hair. You know the kind of freakish fro in the mornings, that flops all around, when your eye's are falling out, almost hitting the ground. Then a mighty yawn, and bits start to stick out, like you been electrocuted, like you hair just wants to shout. (Car wash wooh wooh wooh wooh wooh At the car wash yeah... ) It's both amusing and sexy for me, to see your hair so naturally, I know it's hard to believe, that I find morning hair so dang sexy... Contest: SEXY! - By nette onclaud 2/2/2012 M.Mahauariki © 2012 3rd place
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February 12, 2012 at 2:08 AM
MURRAY,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
Onclaud Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 10:44 PM
breathless, breathless, murray!... congrats on your win in my contest!:) huggs
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 12:03 PM
congrats on a very nice write and win in Nette's contest.
Brown Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 11:44 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Sexy" contest Murray. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 11:41 AM
Congratulations Murray on your win.Enjoyed your poem.
Richards Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 9:49 AM
I am smiling at the twist you took the contest in your own unique way! Sexy morning hair.....love that idea! Congratulations!
Sweetheart Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 8:46 AM
congrats Murray on an exciting win for this sexy submission luv..
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 7:55 AM
Congratulations Murray xx
Pettit Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 10:07 AM
Nice poem Murray. Just one little thing: in the third line of your first verse, get rid of "most". You don't need it.
Mahauariki Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 10:38 AM
thank you diz done, an yeah it's does sound better. muzz
Culverhouse Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 7:17 PM
funny and sexy....
Mahauariki Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 9:57 PM
Well if you cant taken em at there worst, you don't deserve them at there best...
Dailey Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 5:36 PM
Good luck with your entry. You do have a weird sense of sexy if you ask me.
Mahauariki Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 5:39 PM
lol... oh well, I never did like being a conformist... and I needed a laugh... Muzz
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