Morning Hair

morning hair

messy moppy morning rats nest
endless daily mirror defeat
blowdry straighten style spritz
and go lather rinse'n repeat

By: Jeremy Siedlecki
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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La France Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 12:48 PM
very cute and witty poem, best of luck in the contest~~
Mehta Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 7:13 AM
Wonderful entry into the contest of Bad hair Day, Good luck, jeremy
Roberts Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 7:58 PM
good one, good luck in the contest
Pettit Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 7:04 PM
Looks like you have a real contender here. One of the best I've seen so far.
Neels Avatar
January 10, 2011 at 6:53 PM
Yikes this sounds familiar.. I love your last line (",) Good luck for the contest ;-)
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