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Morning Fishing

Morning Fishing Hungry mosquitoes buzz around the brush Early morning brings the fishermen to the lake They burp and pass wind, kings in their kingdom The smell of cigars and cigarettes lace the thick watery smell of the lake They are solemn men, sucking brandy-laced coffee from a thermos, warming up their own way Soon the whirr of reels can be heard a anxious men cast out into the mists, startling ducks and sending them clustered and flustered into the early air Though they stand only yards from one another they maintain silence - fishing is serious business Fishing makes them feel they are rugged men, that plaid jackets and gimme hats make them rise a step above their briefcase and top coat brothers These men cringe at the turning of the world, as nature is forced to surrender to civilization One day the lake will be surrounded by houses and stores Maybe a boat marina will cling to the shore Maybe life will force them into realizing how mortal each of them is But this morning they cast and reel, lords of the lake

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Date: 12/1/2018 8:08:00 PM
You've captured this well, Sherry. I can just picture these guys doing their guy thing out early on the lake, be it in Wisconsin, Minnesota, or down South. So well depicted! ~ Gershon
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Date: 12/1/2018 12:23:00 PM
Beautiful... So beautiful! Keep it up souper.
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Sherry Asbury
Date: 12/1/2018 1:27:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comment. I can remember going when I was well...I loved it.
Date: 11/28/2018 12:02:00 PM
Don't think I would like to fish with the men you describe, Sherry. Took quite a few men offshore fishing on the Gulf of Mexico and while some did smoke and drink, we enjoyed the outings. Love the way you provide such detail -- felt like I was there! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 11/28/2018 11:45:00 AM
This poem is a FAV for me, because it brought my Daddy back into my mind. He and his cronies could do this for hours and hours and hours. They are all gone except one now, The South-side Boys. I wonder some times if the only one left still goes to the lake?
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