Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Morning Delight

Red fireball on the horizon
Played by cobalt blue clouds
Excited onlookers sighing
Birds quickly become loud

Soon heat will warm like fire
Crackling on winter's day_cozy
But with humidity, thirst's desire
Now comfortable morn rosy

Sun no longer red as cast blue
Cobalt on horizonal
Clouds; gold and bright now but then it's
Hidden suddenly small

Gone behind the clouds shy like bride
On wedding day, demure
Worried about pleasing the groom
Then shining bright grandeur

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Keith Bickerstaffe June 21, 2012 at 11:17 AM So much vivid imagery! Your flow and rhyming are impeccable. Rhyming 'grandeur' with 'demure?' ...fantastic! Best wishes, Keith

Jack Horne June 16, 2012 at 12:30 PM beautiful piece, my friend - just loved the last stanza with the bride similie

Bl Devnath June 16, 2012 at 8:37 AM Wonderful description with sweet imagination, enjoyed. Loved always bl

Don Johnson June 15, 2012 at 9:27 PM and alls well that ends this day, love it babe...

Kash Poet June 15, 2012 at 1:17 PM Wonderful imagery here Sara.Enjoyed the read.

Connie Marcum Wong June 15, 2012 at 12:42 PM A lovely tribute to Apollo and the gifts of his golden rays.

Pace Ink-U-Script June 15, 2012 at 12:19 PM An amazing write Sara..always

Lynette Chachere June 15, 2012 at 11:42 AM Ready to start a new day, hopefully its an ease.great portrayals to describe it!.~always&forever

Nette Onclaud June 15, 2012 at 10:58 AM you put the charm on this delightful morning, sara... love the last verse!!... lovely artwords, " shy like bride.").... greaat stuff!..:) hugggs to you!. how's the grandson??

Russell Sivey June 15, 2012 at 8:55 AM What a glorious display of harmonious words my friend! This is an awesome flourishing poem Sara! I just love poetry focusing on the sky, clouds, and the sun! And you do so very wonderfully! The emotion I get out of this write is majestic and delightful at the same time! I desire to read this poem again...Great Work!!