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Morning Delight

Red fireball on the horizon Played by cobalt blue clouds Excited onlookers sighing Birds quickly become loud Soon heat will warm like fire Crackling on winter's day_cozy But with humidity, thirst's desire Now comfortable morn rosy Sun no longer red as cast blue Cobalt on horizonal Clouds; gold and bright now but then it's Hidden suddenly small Gone behind the clouds shy like bride On wedding day, demure Worried about pleasing the groom Then shining bright grandeur

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 6/21/2012 11:17:00 AM
So much vivid imagery! Your flow and rhyming are impeccable. Rhyming 'grandeur' with 'demure?' ...fantastic! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 6/16/2012 12:30:00 PM
beautiful piece, my friend - just loved the last stanza with the bride similie
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Date: 6/16/2012 8:37:00 AM
Wonderful description with sweet imagination, enjoyed. Loved always bl
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Date: 6/15/2012 9:27:00 PM
and alls well that ends this day, love it babe...
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Date: 6/15/2012 1:17:00 PM
Wonderful imagery here Sara.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 6/15/2012 12:42:00 PM
A lovely tribute to Apollo and the gifts of his golden rays.
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Date: 6/15/2012 12:19:00 PM
An amazing write Sara..always
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Date: 6/15/2012 11:42:00 AM
Ready to start a new day, hopefully its an ease.great portrayals to describe it!.~always&forever
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Date: 6/15/2012 10:58:00 AM
you put the charm on this delightful morning, sara... love the last verse!!... lovely artwords, " shy like bride.").... greaat stuff!..:) hugggs to you!. how's the grandson??
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Date: 6/15/2012 8:55:00 AM
What a glorious display of harmonious words my friend! This is an awesome flourishing poem Sara! I just love poetry focusing on the sky, clouds, and the sun! And you do so very wonderfully! The emotion I get out of this write is majestic and delightful at the same time! I desire to read this poem again...Great Work!!
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