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Morning Breeze

The morning breeze is here to greet me, how I love it so As it comes from the trees, with a smooth, nice, cool, flow Straight through windows to the inside, it softly reaches me As I look outside, at fluttering sunlit leaves there are to see The morning breeze is refreshing, floating calmly with my soul As shattered pieces of things left behind, return to being whole Heidi Sands 7/23/17

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Alexis Y.

Date: 7/23/2017 4:31:00 PM

Hi Heidi, You have painted a beautiful picture with words. It was so refreshing. Well done:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/23/2017 4:43:00 PM

Awesome to hear it is refreshing. Thank you Alexis :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/23/2017 3:12:00 PM

I have enjoyed reading your poem. I like the way all the words flow together. I am making it my fav.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/23/2017 3:47:00 PM

Hi Darlene. I am so happy you enjoyed this poem :) And consider it a favorite too. That is nice. I appreciate your comments and support :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/23/2017 9:39:00 AM

Beautiful!

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/23/2017 1:25:00 PM

Thank you Richard :)

Joseph May

Date: 7/23/2017 9:30:00 AM

Wonderful write Heidi...very nice end lines

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/23/2017 1:25:00 PM

Thank you so much Joseph :)

Darren White

Date: 7/23/2017 8:19:00 AM

Beautiful poem Heidi. I can feel that morning breeze.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/23/2017 8:22:00 AM

Hi Darren! Thank you. I am so happy you can feel the breeze. It is so nice :)

Maria Williams

Date: 7/23/2017 7:17:00 AM

Nothing so calming as a beautiful breeze whooshing sweetly through tall trees. I love your poem Heidi, it elicits a sense of calmness and peace...Maria

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/23/2017 7:23:00 AM

That's right Maria, the breeze does that and is just so peaceful. I am happy the poem can reach the reader. I appreciate your comment ! Thank you :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/23/2017 7:12:00 AM

Morning Heidi, A lovely greeting for sure. Maybe the breeze can clam me also today!

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/23/2017 7:14:00 AM

Hi Mike! Thank you. I will hope for you that it will calm you today too :)