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Morning Affair

The sun rises with a faint gleam, my eye sees The breeze can be heard with crackling in trees The acorns fall, bouncing on the ground The day has begun, with what I have found Nature speaks to me, with sights and sounds While there is not a person around Crickets are singing, single leaves fall in air As everything awakens, in this morning affair Heidi Sands 9/24/17

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Joseph May

Date: 9/24/2017 9:13:00 AM

Wonderful write Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/24/2017 9:28:00 AM

Thank you Joseph ! :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/24/2017 7:38:00 AM

Beautifully written my friend! I surely have enjoyed reading this illustrious write this morning! I loved the line, "The breeze can be heard with crackling in trees," as the wind usually is felt not heard, and I loved that allusion there! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/24/2017 7:53:00 AM

Thank you Russell. I am happy you enjoyed this one. Have a nice morning ! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/24/2017 7:28:00 AM

Another beautiful poem, full of morning imagery!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/24/2017 7:53:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay :)