Morning

Morning arriving Children of sun in the air Doing up their shoes September 23/2017

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Jean Murray

Date: 9/23/2017 4:08:00 PM

Just lovely. My middle child had major problems getting this simple task right.

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/23/2017 8:16:00 PM

Thank you ...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/23/2017 5:32:00 AM

A pleasant picture!

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/23/2017 8:17:00 PM

Thank you ...

Paul Callus

Date: 9/23/2017 4:52:00 AM

I enjoyed this fine morning image, Probir. Many times I have been fascinated by children struggling to do up their shoes! Regards // paul

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/23/2017 6:27:00 AM

Thank you, Paul ... but i am speaking of children of the sun gearing up for the day's task ahead ... I do know you too see it in sync with me ... but the poem originated, as poems always do in various perspectives, from my viewing the little girl I have mentioned to Jan in reply to her comment ... Regards ... probir

Jan Allison

Date: 9/22/2017 7:21:00 PM

lovely imagery Probir:-) hugs jan xx

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/22/2017 7:40:00 PM

Thank you, Jan ... I just saw a little girl doing up her shoes ... Sun is just up ... Came the haiku ...