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Morning
Dawn blackbirds rouse me with their sweetest songs and the rooster crows golden sunbeams fill my room I love dawn 1,2,3,4,5,4,3,2,1 checked with HMS Ninette Contest Poetry Contest Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger 07/02/21

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Date: 7/27/2021 9:00:00 AM
Congratulations Jan on your very beautiful winning poem. You truly captured the joyous splendor of a new day.
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Date: 7/24/2021 12:50:00 PM
Congratulations, Jan, so well penned!
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Date: 7/23/2021 12:34:00 PM
Jan, congrats on your 1st place win with your peaceful ninette! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/22/2021 3:49:00 PM
Congrats on the top win, Jan.
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Date: 7/22/2021 5:10:00 AM
Congratulations for your top win Jan ! So nice :)
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Date: 7/21/2021 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jan! Dawn in all of its rich imagery perfectly painted! This is as gentle as morning sunlight and bird songs! Even though I am a night owl, I do love the beauty of dawn - when I'm awake to see it! Hugs!!! :D
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Date: 7/21/2021 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write and morning picture. I also love the pretty dawn time of the day. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 7/21/2021 9:49:00 AM
I love dawn too dear Jan, congrats :)
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Date: 7/21/2021 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations, this is brilliant, Jan, I love the picture of dawn you paint:)
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Date: 7/21/2021 3:34:00 AM
Such a serene Ninette. Congratulations Jan..
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Date: 7/21/2021 3:24:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... so delightful and delighting. God bless you.
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Date: 7/11/2021 7:53:00 AM
This is beautiful Jan :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/12/2021 1:06:00 AM
Thanks Heidi:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/7/2021 1:21:00 PM
Beautiful dawn you have portrayed for us her Jan!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/7/2021 1:28:00 PM
thanks Smita:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/6/2021 3:31:00 PM
Jan, you have a wonderful following that includes yours truly. The birds start here even a few minutes before dawn, and it takes a sound sleeper to dare having the windows open. TTYL
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Date: 7/7/2021 1:28:00 PM
Thanks Duke i love morning:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/4/2021 3:59:00 AM
Love that, Jan. Even the rooster. We back onto farmland and are woken by crows, jackdaws and magpies... sometimes in life, all you desire is a shotgun. Once their young have grown they will clear off, and our morning will be akin to your depiction... minus one rooster... BLISS! Best of luck in contest. Terry
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Date: 7/4/2021 12:59:00 PM
Thanks Terry when i was growing up on my parent's small holding we used to have a cockerel called Charlie he really ruled the roost - am amazed he had the energy to crow with so many hens to look after lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/4/2021 12:43:00 AM
beautiful Jan!
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Date: 7/4/2021 2:26:00 AM
Thanks Art, despite the pesky cock its beautiful lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/3/2021 8:38:00 PM
This is just as picture-perfect a ninette as there is, Jan. Wondrously penned! ~ gw
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Date: 7/4/2021 2:26:00 AM
Thanks GW:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/3/2021 12:28:00 PM
Again, I see dawn as the most beautiful part of the day, and we always make sure when travelling far, that we set off on or journey about an hour before dawn, such a magnificent sight, especially over the open bushveld. Good Luck jan a wonderful poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 7/4/2021 2:26:00 AM
Daybreak is so lovely thanks Jennifer:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/3/2021 11:49:00 AM
Good morning to you too...
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/4/2021 2:27:00 AM
Morning sweet butterfly friend, so lovely to see you this morning:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/3/2021 3:31:00 AM
The perfect morning...wonderfully expressed. Good luck in the contest, Jan. Hope you and hubby are doing well. Hugs // Charlie xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/4/2021 2:27:00 AM
Thanks Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/2/2021 3:23:00 PM
Dawn is absolutely my favorite time of day. Lovely poem. Rich
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Date: 7/2/2021 4:26:00 PM
aww thanks Rich we have some stunning sunrises and spectacular sunsets too:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/2/2021 3:20:00 PM
This is wonderful Jan. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 7/2/2021 3:22:00 PM
Thanks so much Rick i find dawn breaking so uplifting:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/2/2021 2:02:00 PM
Ooooh! This is so pretty. Dawn is a beautiful time of the day <3
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/2/2021 3:12:00 PM
It is beautiful indeed:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/2/2021 11:42:00 AM
Beautiful Jan, we share an appreciation for nature's beauty my friend, Emile.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/2/2021 1:14:00 PM
Thanks Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/2/2021 10:40:00 AM
I love Dawn, too!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/2/2021 10:45:00 AM
Thanks Rico are you going to write a limerick about her - it rhymes with porn lol:-) hugs jan xx
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