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Morn

He shook the blanket and it fell Tumbling over all trees Bouncing upon the hillside far Now veiled unclearly sees Golden sun behind the blanket Bright rays illuminate In straight waves of bright yellow light Soon day rejuvenates Roosters crow in dim light and damp Their melodies supreme The blanket settles in zizzag Folks awaken from dreams A stillness accentuates sound Or the lack thereof An eerie feel like the quiet Before the storm above As the dark featherweight clouds float Black as a widow's veil One ray of hope in the charcoal A pink colored cloud sails Finis' Maybe???

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/21/2015 2:39:00 PM
Nice warm imagery. Sara. You have a wonderfully artistic way about you. A beautiful end. with the pink drifting cloud. Love LINDA
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Date: 11/21/2015 2:58:00 AM
Well articulated Sara,that has helped to bring out the picture very well... I love it. Thanks for your congratulatory message to my " Let us gyrate"...hugs
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Date: 11/20/2015 5:25:00 PM
Loved the picture you paint with your words.... Wonderful!!
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Date: 11/20/2015 2:52:00 AM
Sara, you paint a wonderful picture before the storm... Love the poem. SKAT
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Date: 11/19/2015 5:49:00 PM
great writing just coming to you sitting on the porch!
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Date: 11/19/2015 5:19:00 PM
This is really great and excellent my friend Sara.............A.M.
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Date: 11/19/2015 4:41:00 AM
Sara, wow love the action pack very descriptive stanzas!!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 11/18/2015 7:53:00 PM
Lots of great imagery in this one. Is it for the snow contest?
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/19/2015 7:54:00 AM
Andrea, Not written for a contest just out on the porch.. Sara
Date: 11/16/2015 2:06:00 PM
very descriptive poem sara,loved and liked
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Date: 11/15/2015 9:20:00 AM
You my friend have penned an excellent poem IMHO. ONLY YOU CAN DECIDE IF IT IS FINISHED AS A PIECE OR NOT. Myself, I envision eight more magnificent verses. A7 pm on the way.
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Date: 11/13/2015 11:54:00 AM
each day is a Blessing From Him....in the river of Life we can sink or swim....because only in Love is it safe for us to drown without being saved....so let's just be Thankful For The New Blessing He Gave....Beautiful write sara....;)
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Date: 11/13/2015 12:35:00 AM
A lovely piece, Sara. How's everything going? On the mend? Viv x
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Date: 11/11/2015 10:37:00 PM
Excellent. Beautifully said. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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