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More Than the Stars

If you only knew what you mean to me, You wouldn't doubt or it be a mystery. I care for you more than the stars in the sky, I love being in your warm embrace and having you nigh. Just let my love claim your heart, I will always be there and never part. I love laying next to you, Why must you act like you haven't a clue? Alexis Y. 5-11-16

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Justin Bordner

Date: 5/18/2016 6:53:00 PM

Your heart is very clear and pure in this poem Alexis, and your confusion unintrusive...every pulse speaks it's own clue. I like the soulmate intimacy in your lines Poetess...J.A.B.

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/18/2016 6:57:00 PM

Hi Justin, Its so nice to see you.Thank you so much for such a kind and encouraging response. I appreciate that you stopped by- Alexis

Paul Callus

Date: 5/17/2016 3:35:00 PM

Hi Alexis!! I have just realized you're posting again...welcome back:) And back with your typical style of writing, leading us along and catching us out unawares right at the end:) ~ Regards // paul

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/17/2016 3:51:00 PM

Hi Paul, It's so nice to see you. I will visit you soon. I'm glad you stopped by today- Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/17/2016 12:09:00 PM

- Some suppress and hide their feelings - and some need courage to show them - Lovely poems, Alexis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/17/2016 2:55:00 AM

How is it possible for a man to remain unmoved after hearing the song of your heart dear, Alexis? Wonderful romantic poem! A seven.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2016 8:36:00 PM

ahhh, this is sweet and gives the feeling of frustration. Like WHAT is up with that guy?? Hey, it's GREAT having you back, Alexis.

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/16/2016 8:40:00 PM

Hi Andrea, Thanks you so much for such a thoughtful comment. I'm glad to be back- Alexis