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More Than Friends

With a velvet touch, so passion impeccable Her satin doll eyes flash a sensuous glow My heart is melting by first date evening candlelight Desire rising higher in the flames of a kiss goodnight Pillow dreams of maiden voyage intimacy, friendship moving past platonic Rocket ecstasy faster than a heartbeat, my hope is zooming supersonic All of her, I want to know Every part of me, I’m now willing to show The sharing of loving thoughts flow so pulse easy Enchanted delights of closeness await around the bend After tomorrow, I want us to be more than friends A tantalizing, cell-to-cell talk of new dawn intensity Takes our daily afternoon walk on a first step to a free-falling possibility Twilight pure delights of lip closeness is upon the kiss horizon When time standstill tonight, let us vow thus — to be more than friends

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/10/2019 1:53:00 PM
Hello Freddie, a lovely romantic poem. I enjoyed reading. Hav a nice day my friend.
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Date: 2/23/2019 11:44:00 PM
Such an understated title for such a sizzling vision of the future. Intriguing ink, my friend. Methinks the writer hath been burned at the stake on the altar of love heretofore... ~ One burn victim to another (?)
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Date: 2/22/2019 12:27:00 PM
WoW! Freddie, I've never read a poem of someone wanting to go friends to something "more" quite like this before. Your word selection was on point. This poem is full of life, your reader the anticipation of one yearning and craving to go friends to lovers. You are indeed the romantic warrior. Well done my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/14/2019 10:30:00 AM
Superb imagery here: "Rocket ecstasy faster than a heartbeat, my hope is zooming supersonic "; "new dawn intensity"; a lovely romantic pen.
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Date: 2/8/2019 10:37:00 AM
Your poem is exquisite Freddie. Loved this part the utmost: "A tantalizing, cell-to-cell talk of new dawn intensity Takes our daily afternoon walk on a first step to a free-falling possibility." My imagination ...well, let's just say you do not want to know. You are too young to know.
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