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More Than a Name

I want her to see, Not just a man. One day may she claim, More than a name. I want her to see, Just who I am, The voices and choices, That speak only me.

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/25/2018 11:21:00 PM

I cannot believe how much you have done with a mere 35 words! I counted them, to be sure, but oh, my! The word choices were exact, and right on, Honestly.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 3/10/2018 7:48:00 PM

Honestly, I hope she does.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/1/2018 6:17:00 PM

You deserve to be seen for who you are. Very nice :)

Mick Talbot

Date: 3/1/2018 6:10:00 PM

Honestly J.T. It says it all for me. Keep writing poetry. For I see the man you see. Writing his thoughts succinctly.