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More Than a Crush

Nightly I see your face as you seduce my dreams Swimming around nude in a crystal clear stream In a secluded cavern with a waterfall entry There is no other dream I'd choose, unconsciously This my dear is heavenly Endowing my mind with your epic beauty Right now I'm in your temple To me you are sacred Sending waves of enticement At which our love is truly manifested Surrounded by trees high above the crust At the base of mother natures grandest creation We make love Your entwined in my arms I cannot let go Kissing your lips reminds me of sugar cane Used to make my life sweet Not a substitute, the real deal Finally passion I can feel Your heart sings out and I respond punctually Approaching, I caress your back Moving to your shoulders loosening the straps Your dress hits the ground On your back now, a sight so profound Awaking every morning with the same feeling Your scent is in my memory I can feel your warmth from a distance Fooling me beyond confusion This crush I have will become a true love story But for now I will sit back, Be patient, and watch until the right moment Jared Pickett....:JP]

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/4/2010 12:17:00 PM
Mr JP, this is truly lovely. She must have been a beautiful lady Lauren is a pretty name. Wow such passion. Scarlett
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Date: 9/19/2009 6:44:00 AM
Gorgeous poem Jared, she must be some lady>>James
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Date: 8/18/2009 9:51:00 AM
I loved it! So sexy and passionate!
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Date: 8/18/2009 7:13:00 AM
This is a gorgeous write my friend..I can feel the love and admiration in the poem...wonderful work.
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