More Than a Crush

Nightly I see your face as you seduce my dreams
Swimming around nude in a crystal clear stream
In a secluded cavern with a waterfall entry
There is no other dream I'd choose, unconsciously
This my dear is heavenly

Endowing my mind with your epic beauty
Right now I'm in your temple
To me you are sacred
Sending waves of enticement
At which our love is truly manifested

Surrounded by trees high above the crust
At the base of mother natures grandest creation
We make love
Your entwined in my arms
I cannot let go

Kissing your lips reminds me of sugar cane
Used to make my life sweet
Not a substitute, the real deal
Finally passion I can feel

Your heart sings out and I respond punctually
Approaching, I caress your back
Moving to your shoulders 
loosening the straps
Your dress hits the ground
On your back now, a sight so profound

Awaking every morning with the same feeling
Your scent is in my memory
I can feel your warmth from a distance
Fooling me beyond confusion
This crush I have will become a true love story
But for now I will sit back, 
Be patient, and watch until the right moment


Jared Pickett....:JP]

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/4/2010 12:17:00 PM
Mr JP, this is truly lovely. She must have been a beautiful lady Lauren is a pretty name. Wow such passion. Scarlett
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Date: 9/19/2009 6:44:00 AM
Gorgeous poem Jared, she must be some lady>>James
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Date: 8/18/2009 9:51:00 AM
I loved it! So sexy and passionate!
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Date: 8/18/2009 7:13:00 AM
This is a gorgeous write my friend..I can feel the love and admiration in the poem...wonderful work.
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