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More Is More

solemnly breathless in behemoth miasma effect starts playing havoc with my asthma dropped in a world of despair, me as well carrying dark in darkness - more is more of that, my eyes won't know, my ears may

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/20/2023 3:30:00 PM

masterful light verse, Clive. I've never heard of the word miasma--perfect rhyme for asthma :-) I loved 'dark in darkness' more is more of that....that's creative. I'm impressed. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/21/2023 12:06:00 AM

It is a geat word, this one was fun to write, I'm glad you like it, thanks for your thoughts Sara

Di11y Da11y

Date: 11/20/2023 2:32:00 AM

Great - my comment won't do it justice so I'll just send a nod - clearly deep and powerful stuff

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/20/2023 4:29:00 AM

Haha - on the basis of your other work then :) still deserved

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/20/2023 3:02:00 AM

You give me too much credit here, funnily I was reading a book and saw the word miasma, then thought that sounds like my asthma, I don't have asthma but it sounded like the words so tried to think of other things sounding similar, that's it really haha, thanks for your time as ever Dilly, much appreciated