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Harrisham Rhyme
Created by Harrisham Minhas, from Punjab, India. It is a six line rhyming poem with the rhyme scheme: ababab, In this form, the last letter of the first word of each line is the first letter of the first word of the next line.

Nurses defeat death, determined and brave, seems strange, they're overworked and underpaid. Some front-line workers died, when things got grave each risked their lives, despite being afraid. Honk your horns! Applaud! And cheerfully wave! Kind acts are more heartfelt, when they’re homemade. (Harrisham Rhyme) 05/03/2020

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 5/5/2020 11:06:00 PM

Happy Cinco de Mayo and sincere congratulations for your HM in Brian's contest, Emile - keep up the great work! I hope you are staying safe and sound, My Friend - blessings! :o)

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/6/2020 9:56:00 AM

Thanks Gregory, I appreciate it , stay safe my friend, Emile.

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/5/2020 1:32:00 PM

Emile, your heartfelt poem is exceptional and is framed beautifully within this poetry form (loved your poet's note about it). Congratulations on your wonderful win, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/5/2020 6:56:00 PM

Thanks so much Susan, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/3/2020 1:46:00 PM

nice one, emile! i'm so glad that we've all been applauding the health-care workers, especially after hearing that in some other countries, nurses are being jeered at and ostracized because of their proximity to covid patients...

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/5/2020 6:55:00 PM

Thanks Ilene, health-care workers are the heart of humanity, they deserve our appreciation my friend, Emile.