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The library books were overdue. The doors were locked. Inspired by Brian Strands "Spaces" Contest

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Daver Austin

Date: 2/10/2010 10:52:00 AM

Poke them in the "book return" slot along with an I.O.U. I can just see the lobrarian's face. These librarians are, mostly, too damn serious. BIG LOVE, daver

John Freeman

Date: 2/8/2010 11:03:00 PM

Good luck with this one Dane, Sincerely, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/8/2010 7:20:00 PM

Wonderful lines for your entry into Brian's contest.. good luck... fun contest this is.. like your title... terrific.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/8/2010 4:02:00 PM

Kool man shue. Yippee tye yi hey. Just to let you know dear friend I enjoyed the read. Wishing you the best in the contest. I am going to try the end line. Hope I can do it. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/8/2010 4:00:00 PM

funny, yep monday blues!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/8/2010 2:16:00 PM

Interesting write that could be finished many ways. Good luck in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara