Mop Bucket

I am scrubbing the floor at 3 am 
with every swipe 
I think your name
once held so dear

The floor now shiny and clean
muck and mire all washed away
dawns pale light  
contrasts what swirls in the
mop bucket of my mind...

dirty thoughts 
snarling biting
clinking tapping
cluttered stairs
tripping falling
edge of night
blocked out Sun
fighting light
erase unwanted 
tumbled jumbled
spit stained name
corrupted in my head
ringing clanging
banging to be free
so in the silence 
kill these words
before they kill me

M S  7/20/15

 footnote: while it's not possible to make spit stains unless you're tobacco chewer it  was only my mental imagery of how I did feel about this person.. I have since mentally set this ruined relationship aside in my head, but the pain still lives. Short of a form of brainwashing I guess there's no escape from remembering lost loves.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/2/2015 6:37:00 PM
torment lasts as long as you let it....how can it survive if it is neglected....just pick up your feet and keep on walking....otherwise it is nothing else but useless talking....;)
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