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Moonwane

O fickle moon! caretaker of souls who chase their dreams across the heavens you waver now, and waste away in quiet desperation; night surrenders to the light and reveries fade. O passionless pale face! barely transparent, bloodless as a dying rose in throes of dissolution.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 9/29/2013 10:44:00 AM
Hello Keith, congratulations on having this poem featured on the soup once again... always~ Linda
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Date: 9/28/2013 9:04:00 AM
So true in this broken, struggling world. Reality is thrust, is forced on us. Good work, Keith, Love, daver
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Date: 7/6/2013 10:25:00 PM
:-) enjoying your Featured Poem of the week. take care and have yourself a great coming week. xox~ LINDA
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Date: 7/6/2013 1:05:00 PM
Beautiful imagery.. I will never see the moon as before. I am pleased to have found this poem. Thank you!
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Date: 7/4/2013 2:10:00 PM
Keith, I love your waning moon with haunting imagery. Congrats on having this on the Featured Poem of the Week :)
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Date: 7/4/2013 10:02:00 AM
KEITH, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. have a nice 4th of July. *SKAT
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Date: 7/1/2013 9:35:00 AM
Something new - a stark image of the moon. I agree. There are two sides to most any vision. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 5/27/2009 6:12:00 AM
Powerful imageries ... an embryonic myth or character with fledgling wings... a delicious write. Bravo
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