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Moonstruck

. Yes I am moonstruck romantically dreamy I am full of thoughts hungry to be poetic I’m trite but eager to rise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/14/2009 5:07:00 PM
i love the moon...-Alley
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Date: 5/13/2009 12:56:00 PM
Awesome! That's the spirit of rising above the clouds. I like the essence and the motivation in this poem. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 5/13/2009 7:22:00 AM
Trite? I don't think so. Wonderful poetry. Happy to know you are hungry to write more. Love that line. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/11/2009 9:43:00 AM
As delightful as the movie "Moonstruck," James! We have a Nicholas Cage image of you in mind when we read this poem. Those "romantically dreamy" thoughts are priceless. Very upbeat, filled with promise! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/11/2009 6:52:00 AM
Not not trite....but Excellent !! Wonderful tanka!!
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Date: 5/11/2009 6:30:00 AM
Oh this is amazing! Moonstruck... so meaningful. Keep writing my friend :)
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