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Moonstone Or Stardust Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Ink Empress

11.11.24

Ninth Place

Moonstone Melodies

Rainbow moonstone celestial
adularescence, transforming milky way white, 
pale azure luster to an electric sapphire 
Luminescence consistent beauty 
Never ending, blending its cadence 
with the colors of the rainbow
Sprinkling  the  Universe ~
Stripping its steely metallic moon
Sacred stones spilled upon earth 
Timeless and mysterious moonstone
Adorning her ring finger flaunting, adoring
An ascendant jewel coiled demurely 
around the nape of her neck,
formerly worn by the moon goddess’s
perfuming melodies and ballads 
Now ethereal beauty's, both are fetching
An antique amulet she keeps in her grip
A clustering carcanet seen by a few
A rivière resting atop her breasts
A priceless periapt symphony she gives into~
its melody, surrendering to palliating powers
Queen of her own throne rich in clairvoyance
Graceful, feminine and demure
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Date: 11/19/2024 3:52:00 AM
Anaya, you bring beauty to a new level of what's possible. Makes me think she could be one of the welcome and good gods we could look up to. The feminine qualities are currently in short supply!
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Date: 11/20/2024 12:51:00 PM
Ty, you're very kind! So true, Duke. I should have given the goddess a personality, I'm sure she is just as melodic as the moonstone. Lol. It's all about the Moonstone Melodies!
Date: 11/13/2024 11:55:00 AM
- A pleasure to read your winning poem, congratulations Anaya :) - hugs
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Date: 11/13/2024 1:15:00 PM
Ty, Anne-Lise! xhugs
Date: 11/13/2024 7:51:00 AM
Dear anaya; what a gorgeous picture youv used here, for this resilient queen of moonstone! How beautiful! I love how creative you are with your wordplay, and it is the ending that won me over really , so much depth, powerful ending! “ Queen of her own throne rich in clairvoyance Graceful, feminine and demure “ so empowering! Demure, seems to be a word now tending and it made me smile seeing it used in a poem, so cool! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on getting placed!
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Date: 11/13/2024 10:27:00 AM
Isn't it a beautiful pictorial? I added the stones. Ty for dropping and showing what you liked, appreciate it. Demure is elegance. Ty Ink for my placement!! Smilingly
Date: 11/12/2024 10:48:00 AM
Nice poem and picture. How do you come up with such nice words, must be articulate and English major.
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Date: 11/12/2024 1:40:00 PM
No, I'm not, Jay, smiles. I use the tools and research a lot, every word that isnt the norm.. Ty!
Date: 11/12/2024 7:13:00 AM
Dear Anaya, a truly mesmerizing journey through the ethereal beauty of moonstones. I absolutely loved your lyrics, which created a stunning picture of these mystical gems, intertwining their physical allure with celestial magic. Yes, Your words shimmer like the very moonstones you describe. Breathtaking! - Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 11/12/2024 1:46:00 PM
Particularly have chosen the rainbow moonstone, there are seven types manufactured for jewelry. I found fantasy somehow, the rest is Ink's poetry which has inspired me and many others. Ty, Daniel, always a pleasure. Xhugsx
Date: 11/12/2024 1:00:00 AM
so lovely poetry, so inspiring, enjoyed yann
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Date: 11/12/2024 1:22:00 AM
Ty, Yann!
Date: 11/12/2024 12:20:00 AM
This is excellent work, Anaya, I simply love that pic and how your poem matches it:)
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Date: 11/12/2024 1:22:00 AM
Ty, Joanna! I appreciate it.
Date: 11/11/2024 3:42:00 PM
Dear Anaya, your poem is a jewel, A priceless symphony in poetry… Beryl
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Date: 11/11/2024 4:20:00 PM
I really appreciate the marvelous review, Beryl Ty a trillion x's! Xhugs
Date: 11/11/2024 3:31:00 PM
Definitely a big contender for Inks contest Anaya, I think she will dive headfirst though the adularescence and swim about in this high-spec piece for quite some time, an extremely well polished up poem, all the best for contest, cheers David
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Date: 11/11/2024 3:52:00 PM
Ty really! A wordsmith so talented as you are, comment as this is worth a jackpot. Do you think adularescence is too bulky? lol adularia, sounds like a disease. its been only fun illuminating moonstones. I really do need an extra 2 minutes for pictorial adjustments and swapping sentences. I appreciate your reviews, David. Fantasy keeps my mind off politics. Cheers! :)
Date: 11/11/2024 2:44:00 PM
You've been upping your game lately, this is quite awesome. Jo Daniel did one similar in style. Inky gonna love it. Great photo too
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Date: 11/11/2024 2:59:00 PM
:D Barely made it into the contest. My fantasy muse had awoken, and this took only a few hours, Tommy. Hopefully, my fingers crossed. I'll check Jo's, Ty!
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