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Moonstone Or Stardust Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Ink Empress

11.11.24

Ninth Place

Rainbow moonstone celestial adularescence, transforming milky way white, pale azure luster to an electric sapphire Luminescence consistent beauty Never ending, blending its cadence with the colors of the rainbow Sprinkling the Universe ~ Stripping its steely metallic moon Sacred stones spilled upon earth Timeless and mysterious moonstone Adorning her ring finger flaunting, adoring An ascendant jewel coiled demurely around the nape of her neck, formerly worn by the moon goddess’s perfuming melodies and ballads Now ethereal beauty's, both are fetching An antique amulet she keeps in her grip A clustering carcanet seen by a few A rivière resting atop her breasts A priceless periapt symphony she gives into~ its melody, surrendering to palliating powers Queen of her own throne rich in clairvoyance Graceful, feminine and demure

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/19/2024 3:52:00 AM

Anaya, you bring beauty to a new level of what's possible. Makes me think she could be one of the welcome and good gods we could look up to. The feminine qualities are currently in short supply!

I Am Anaya
Date: 11/20/2024 12:51:00 PM

Ty, you're very kind! So true, Duke. I should have given the goddess a personality, I'm sure she is just as melodic as the moonstone. Lol. It's all about the Moonstone Melodies!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2024 11:55:00 AM

- A pleasure to read your winning poem, congratulations Anaya :) - hugs

I Am Anaya
Date: 11/13/2024 1:15:00 PM

Ty, Anne-Lise! xhugs

Ink Empress

Date: 11/13/2024 7:51:00 AM

Dear anaya; what a gorgeous picture youv used here, for this resilient queen of moonstone! How beautiful! I love how creative you are with your wordplay, and it is the ending that won me over really , so much depth, powerful ending! “ Queen of her own throne rich in clairvoyance Graceful, feminine and demure “ so empowering! Demure, seems to be a word now tending and it made me smile seeing it used in a poem, so cool! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on getting placed!

I Am Anaya
Date: 11/13/2024 10:27:00 AM

Isn't it a beautiful pictorial? I added the stones. Ty for dropping and showing what you liked, appreciate it. Demure is elegance. Ty Ink for my placement!! Smilingly

Jay Narain

Date: 11/12/2024 10:48:00 AM

Nice poem and picture. How do you come up with such nice words, must be articulate and English major.

I Am Anaya
Date: 11/12/2024 1:40:00 PM

No, I'm not, Jay, smiles. I use the tools and research a lot, every word that isnt the norm.. Ty!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 11/12/2024 7:13:00 AM

Dear Anaya, a truly mesmerizing journey through the ethereal beauty of moonstones. I absolutely loved your lyrics, which created a stunning picture of these mystical gems, intertwining their physical allure with celestial magic. Yes, Your words shimmer like the very moonstones you describe. Breathtaking! - Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

I Am Anaya
Date: 11/12/2024 1:46:00 PM

Particularly have chosen the rainbow moonstone, there are seven types manufactured for jewelry. I found fantasy somehow, the rest is Ink's poetry which has inspired me and many others. Ty, Daniel, always a pleasure. Xhugsx

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/12/2024 1:00:00 AM

so lovely poetry, so inspiring, enjoyed yann

I Am Anaya
Date: 11/12/2024 1:22:00 AM

Ty, Yann!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/12/2024 12:20:00 AM

This is excellent work, Anaya, I simply love that pic and how your poem matches it:)

I Am Anaya
Date: 11/12/2024 1:22:00 AM

Ty, Joanna! I appreciate it.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/11/2024 3:42:00 PM

Dear Anaya, your poem is a jewel, A priceless symphony in poetry… Beryl

I Am Anaya
Date: 11/11/2024 4:20:00 PM

I really appreciate the marvelous review, Beryl Ty a trillion x's! Xhugs

David Kavanagh

Date: 11/11/2024 3:31:00 PM

Definitely a big contender for Inks contest Anaya, I think she will dive headfirst though the adularescence and swim about in this high-spec piece for quite some time, an extremely well polished up poem, all the best for contest, cheers David

I Am Anaya
Date: 11/11/2024 3:52:00 PM

Ty really! A wordsmith so talented as you are, comment as this is worth a jackpot. Do you think adularescence is too bulky? lol adularia, sounds like a disease. its been only fun illuminating moonstones. I really do need an extra 2 minutes for pictorial adjustments and swapping sentences. I appreciate your reviews, David. Fantasy keeps my mind off politics. Cheers! :)

Tom Woody

Date: 11/11/2024 2:44:00 PM

You've been upping your game lately, this is quite awesome. Jo Daniel did one similar in style. Inky gonna love it. Great photo too

I Am Anaya
Date: 11/11/2024 2:59:00 PM

:D Barely made it into the contest. My fantasy muse had awoken, and this took only a few hours, Tommy. Hopefully, my fingers crossed. I'll check Jo's, Ty!