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Moonshine

Oh, Moonshiner, man of the mountains high, Where whispers of wind and wildcats' cry. Your heart a kiln, your soul aflame, With the secret of white lightning's name. In hollows deep, your still does hum, A symphony of steam, a hidden drum. From fields of corn, a golden juice, To fiery spirit, in silver cruse. They call it 'stump water,' 'skullcracker,' too, This potent elixir, born of dew, A 'ruckus juice,' for joy and strife, A taste of freedom, a taste of life. You're a craftsman skilled, a master bold, In the art of alchemy, stories untold. With fire and patience, you coax it forth, A spirit potent, of the mountain's worth. So, raise a glass, to the moonshiner's art, A rebel's brew, to stir the heart, A taste of freedom, a whisper in the night, A lightning flash, a fiery light.

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Date: 9/22/2024 1:32:00 PM
Love how your rhymes slide so smoothly with great rhythm. Here's to you! :)
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Date: 9/11/2024 12:52:00 PM
I like how your poem celebrates the mystique and artistry of the moonshiner, evoking the rugged landscape of the mountains and the clandestine nature of the craft. The opening lines immediately set the scene, placing the moonshiner in a world where "whispers of wind and wildcats cry," suggesting an untamed, isolated environment in which the moonshiner's work takes place. The juxtaposition of nature’s wildness with the moonshiner’s fiery passion— "your heart a kiln, your soul aflame"—establishes the deep connection between the character and his elemental craft.
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Date: 9/10/2024 9:32:00 PM
Strong stuff Aleisa, OK in moderation lol. Tom
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