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Moonshadow

strolling in shadows silence screams serenity blessing of moonlight 01.20.2022 syllables checked with howmanysyllables.com For Tania Kitchin's "Nature haiku with alliteration" contest

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/24/2022 9:05:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! God bless you.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/24/2022 12:59:00 PM

Jo, congratulations on your winning placement with your delightful haiku!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/24/2022 10:19:00 AM

Oh, this is a delightful picture Jo! Love "blessings of moonlight" and your sensory alliteration! Sending you blessings.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/24/2022 9:24:00 AM

Wonderful work. Congratulations!

Mike Bayles

Date: 1/22/2022 7:10:00 PM

Very nice, Jo. It's wonderful.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/21/2022 2:00:00 PM

Center line is beautiful!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/21/2022 7:21:00 AM

- Beautiful written, Jo :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Feltham

Date: 1/21/2022 12:55:00 AM

Great Haiku. Have a lovely day.

Joseph May

Date: 1/20/2022 7:36:00 PM

Lovely Haiku Jo, best wishes

John Watt

Date: 1/20/2022 5:27:00 PM

I love the contrast of "silence screams serenity". Soft moonlight is such a peaceful and quiet way to end each day.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 1/20/2022 4:51:00 PM

Beautiful poem brings a serene feeling, Jo. Both Haiku and alliteration - sounds perfect! Love the title!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/20/2022 11:52:00 AM

Hello Jo Daniel, walking in the moonlight is romantic when a full moon. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/20/2022 11:39:00 AM

Ahh!!! A walk in the moonlight or as seen through an exciting window. I enjoyed reading this one. Your visit to my page was revivifying. Sara

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/20/2022 11:33:00 AM

Very nice and peaceful to read . I enjoyed this :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/20/2022 10:01:00 AM

A perfect nightime scene Jo, so tranquil. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/20/2022 9:00:00 AM

Loved your contribution. Great alliteration. Best for a win.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/20/2022 7:42:00 AM

No greater joy Jo, then being blessed by the moonlight, and by a poem such as this, Beautiful as heaven dear, thank you xo