Moonset Over the Sleeping Plain

A mournful moon ascended, 
  Haggard, 
     Bland,
        Weak.
Silence unfurled upon the grassy plain.
        Gloomy shadows:
I felt so depressed
        And lonely.

All around a sense of nostalgia, 
Of reluctance 
    That made me wince in pain.
I sat beneath an old, gnarled oak tree.
The air was mute
     But not peaceful!

Still, sparse stars swung in perfect symphony.
Dreams descended on restless somnambulists.
The waning moon continued 
       Its steady downward course.

The dark green plain stretched afar.
     Where were their ghostly shadows?
Spectral and weird darkness seem to dissolve.
     The moon was now at its resting place.
Soon, the sun would clear my befogged mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
May 25, 2026 at 5:05 PM
sad but beautifully written at the same time. Like what you've done here.
Ball Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 1:16 AM
With this read I could see a lonely soul wandering alone on a dark deserted street. Very well expressed my friend. Hope it isn't you. God Bless, JB
Daniel Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 6:06 AM
A beautifully sad poem that combines the excellence of nature with human emotions, Victor, well done:)
Anaya Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 7:18 PM
A haunting waning moon, nostalgic, yes it isn't a restless somnambulists best choice of moons with foggy notions, well told, Victor. I Learned another word. I hope just a fantasy, though it isn't unusual for us . Take care & blessings
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 1:31 AM
Very hauntingly beautiful, Victor. A very well written and descriptive work, I could so imagine the scene of a sleepless night.
Winter Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 9:11 PM
Dear Victor, your poem felt so relatable. I get anxious at night but the morning sun gives hope again and clears my mind. A brilliant write! I love the writing style. Best, Anne
Edmonds  Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 7:05 PM
Victor, thought the nights may be lonely and blue, tomorrow the sun will shine for you… Beryl
Kannan Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 5:39 AM
Lovely but poignant write... Loved the flow.... L
Empress Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 3:12 AM
Oh gosh dear Victor, what a poignant and soul hitting poem this is! I felt so many emotions reading this! And i love the way youv formatted the poem ~ subtle reflection of thoughts within expressed so poetically! A new fave for me this is! Sending you light always
Buehler Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 6:26 PM
I read about many sunsets, but I don;t recall reading about a moonset before I much enjoyed this moody and mysterious poem. It's a fave.
DiMino Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 1:51 PM
Very entrancing read, Victor; mysterious mood. "Where were their ghostly shadows? Spectral and weird darkness seem to dissolve." -- Love it!
Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 12:10 PM
Very atmospheric writing, Victor. I really like it
Poet Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 8:27 AM
Victor, the poetry appears ominous and gloomy, but the moment the sun rose, there was complete harmony in the air. How ideas can change the air is quite remarkable. Appreciate how aesthetics can lift your mood.
Cunningham Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 5:36 AM
Quite a dark and foreboding verse Victor, then daylight came bringing the light and warmth of the sun. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 5:01 AM
The air was mute But not peaceful! …It is crazy how our thoughts can change the atmosphere. …lovely how the loveliness lifts your mood. Hugs. On my recent visit to Europe, I thought of you as I looked at the airport travel to Malta. I was able to see the Mediterranean Sea on this visit. I got off the tour bus in Barcelona and reveled at the waves. Ahhh…
Sands Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 4:43 AM
Wow. Great descriptions and nice turn around at the end :)
Kendrick Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 3:59 AM
Victor, I feel like it is kind of dark as if something bad might happen, but the sun is going to shine, and all the shadows of fear will disappear. Sara K.
Hind Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 10:16 PM
has a mysterious feel, enjoyed :)
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