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Moon's Tears-Lost Innocence

Golden moon's tears rain through shear silken mist,
when shadows grow long in evening breeze,
the flute of the faun through hushed trees
fills the night in baneful tryst.
Arduous sounds of love's
passionate caress
leaving lovers'
stolen kiss
ever
lost.


01/28/16

Copyright © James Inman | Year Posted 2016

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Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 2/6/2016 3:01:00 PM You are a poet extraordinaire! Your phrasing and imagery, and the skill with which you have crafted this splendid ETHEREE. Well done indeed!! Regards, Keith A favourite writer for me! Login to Reply James Inman Date: 2/7/2016 9:56:00 AM You leave me breathless, Keith. Three visits on a single evening and such exceptional comments coming from such an exceptional and prolific poet as yourself. Your kindness is overwhelming. A very deep Thank You to you Sir.

Elaine George Date: 1/30/2016 9:00:00 AM Such beautiful visuals in this well done Etheree, James. Login to Reply James Inman Date: 1/30/2016 12:38:00 PM Thank you Elaine.

Anthony Mark Date: 1/30/2016 4:01:00 AM " Moon's tears rain silken, through shear golden mists" Login to Reply James Inman Date: 1/31/2016 4:38:00 PM Thank you for the clarification, Mark. Your point is well taken. Anthony Mark Date: 1/31/2016 2:11:00 AM i personaly think "Golden" is a weak word to start a strong write ? James Inman Date: 1/30/2016 8:09:00 AM Not sure what your intent is here. Do you prefer this word placement or is it a reference to something else?

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/29/2016 8:30:00 PM You never fail to amaze me with your evocative writing, my friend. So lovely!! Login to Reply James Inman Date: 1/30/2016 7:50:00 AM Thank you Andrea.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/29/2016 9:16:00 AM - Lovely writing, James !!! - I wish you a wonderful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply James Inman Date: 1/29/2016 9:45:00 AM Thanks Anne Lise, enjoy your weekend as well.

Jan Allison Date: 1/28/2016 2:34:00 PM WOW this is a stunning etheree James such lovely imagery in so few lines:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply James Inman Date: 1/28/2016 3:01:00 PM Thanks Jan.

Ovidiu Bocsa Date: 1/28/2016 10:05:00 AM An admirable tear.Let it be of continual joy. Congrat. Login to Reply James Inman Date: 1/28/2016 11:48:00 AM Thank you, Ovidiu.