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moon's guardian

only daughter
beautiful moon face
will his love eclipse mine

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Date: 9/26/2019 10:27:00 AM
Beautiful ! :-) x
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/26/2019 10:49:00 AM
Thanks Elaine.
Date: 11/6/2018 4:28:00 PM
Hi Richard, a wonderful Questionku flows from your pen. So much is said in so few words. I don't know how you manage to do so. This one goes into my faves my friend. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 12/7/2017 12:05:00 AM
A great questionku poem to which any answer could be somehow unsatisfying.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/7/2017 8:56:00 AM
Thanks Afzal.
Date: 12/2/2017 11:36:00 AM
That's a nice one, Richard. I think it will be a very different kind of love that simply does not compare with, nor diminish, the father's love.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/2/2017 1:24:00 PM
I agree, this however deals with a parent's inability to let go. Thanks for your visit Agnes.
Date: 12/1/2017 8:15:00 PM
A well expressed poem Richard. Peace and love Always my friend.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/2/2017 1:24:00 PM
Thanks Darlene.
Date: 12/1/2017 12:33:00 PM
Wow Rick, this is one of the best I've seen so much said in so few words, written as if you were the father, great wordplay and imagery, I've gotta fave this one!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/2/2017 1:24:00 PM
You are kind John.
Date: 11/30/2017 1:13:00 PM
The moon an ever phasing shape shifts each month as does the daily ocean tides. Inspiring three lines.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/2/2017 1:25:00 PM
Thanks Kristina.
Date: 11/27/2017 7:04:00 PM
very deep question and so evident of a father's love of his daughter and mixed feelings on losing her to her husband. I'VE EXPERIENCED THAT FIRST HAND MYSELF.. Great poem and so much packed in such few words.. Now that is top poetic talent on display... A fav...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/27/2017 7:06:00 PM
Thanks Robert.
Date: 11/25/2017 7:04:00 PM
Awww...I can only imagine what emotions a Dad experiences, but this, I'm sure, sums it up beautifully in few words. Great write!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/27/2017 7:06:00 PM
Thanks Rhoda. ;0)
Date: 11/23/2017 7:05:00 AM
Never! Thoughtful questionku, I can understand a father's heart, Richard:)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/23/2017 7:44:00 AM
Thanks Jo.
Date: 11/18/2017 7:22:00 PM
OMG, one of the best questionku ever!! FAVE
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/23/2017 7:43:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.:0)
Date: 11/15/2017 1:21:00 PM
Lovely Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/18/2017 3:34:00 PM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 11/15/2017 7:01:00 AM
Stunning. Brilliant write.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/15/2017 8:21:00 AM
Thanks Scott.
Date: 11/14/2017 10:01:00 PM
Yes, Richard, I thought about that with my own daughter's latest beau. And the one after. And the one after that..... nicely writ, Sir. Regards, Viv
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/15/2017 8:21:00 AM
Thanks Viv!;0)
Date: 11/14/2017 10:06:00 AM
A beautiful pen Richard :) Bless! xomo
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/15/2017 8:42:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, I enjoyed your dove poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/15/2017 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Maureen.
Date: 11/14/2017 9:59:00 AM
Just back to thank you for that comment on my Blushing Virgin Soul poem. I really liked your play on words...True, so true.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/15/2017 8:37:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, I couldn't resist.;0)
Date: 11/14/2017 3:47:00 AM
Oh Rick, this is so beautiful...I'm enthralled by it's powerful message, and the fact that you incorporated the moon in such a way that I'm pleased to see its splendor! The message is really sad though my friend! I don't think anyone could eclipse the love of you and your daughter! That is forever true, no matter what it is unconditional, even if at times it doesn't feel like it! I truly loved reading this grandiose piece this morning, Great work!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/14/2017 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Russell, I personally don't have a daughter but can imagine the protective instinct. Also I think it is okay that another's love eclipses his own. It does not mean that his love has stopped shining it is just less visible for a time. Thanks for such a great comment Russell.
Date: 11/14/2017 3:12:00 AM
New form studied here, nice one Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/14/2017 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Wilfred, please give it a try.
Date: 11/14/2017 1:22:00 AM
On no,you are not King Lear, Richard. Loved it.Regards.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/14/2017 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Rajat.
Date: 11/13/2017 11:33:00 PM
Oh dear....nothing can eclipse that. It is only a different form of love, nothing more....nothing less. Beautiful, indeed. :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/14/2017 8:54:00 AM
Yes different and it is okay that for a time to be eclipsed. The father's love of course will continue to shine.
Date: 11/13/2017 9:47:00 PM
This is so beautiful Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/14/2017 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Arthur.
Date: 11/13/2017 7:10:00 PM
aww Richard this gave me a tear in my eye an absolute little gem of a poem:-) into my faves:-) hugs jan
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/14/2017 8:56:00 AM
Wow, thanks Jan.