Moon's Breath

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Written on January 16, 2024

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Hush Sing Silence In quiet Music echoes calm Rhythms of light, falling soft, gentle Erasing inklike night shadows, pitch-black silhouettes, While the song flows on, ancient stars glisten and glimmer, wise as the faded moon’s warm breath

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Terry Miller

Date: 1/28/2024 7:25:00 AM

Very nicely done, congratulations

Ink Empress

Date: 1/27/2024 5:15:00 AM

dear gina, this is beautiful and musically pleasing as well as so calming to read. It is soulfully divine and i love the flow of your poem. I especially loved the lines “ In quiet Music echoes calm Rhythms of light, falling soft, gentle Erasing inklike night shadows“ so true and profound, congratulations on your well deserved win, thank you for sharing

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2024 3:48:00 PM

This is so gorgeous, dear. I am sure it will be a top win!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/16/2024 3:41:00 PM

your poem is captivating and captures the moon, one of nature's best source of reflection and nighttime calmness. I loved this one, too. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Sam Scott

Date: 1/16/2024 2:09:00 PM

The moon will always be a source of fascination and poetic inspiration.. captured wonderfully here. I like the form! All the best Gina :)

Silent One

Date: 1/16/2024 12:06:00 PM

Nicely done and nice arrangement of words.. sent you soupmail.