Moonlit Prayers

Lank shimmery hair flows off her shoulders
Cascading aloft sweet midnight zephyr
Alone she sits perched on seaside boulders
Under somber moonlight where he'd left her

Night after night she's at the rendezvous
Serene silhouette against the skyline
Amorously bidding her love adieu
Should by design the stars divine align

The twilight shadows hide the tears that flow
Deferring to cosmic powers that be
Prayers released beneath a live tableau
Akin lost mermaid lingering at sea

Love lost in surf leaving a soul in strife
Fate to reunite love in the next life



AP: 2nd place 2025

Submitted on May 13, 2019 for contest CHOICES (PHOTO #3) sponsored by SARA KENDRICK  - HONORABLE MENTION

and January 8, 2019 for contest BEAUTIFUL SADNESS sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON  -  RANKED 10TH

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Date: 1/22/2019 11:46:00 PM
Beautiful! Missed this one, Wonderful
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Date: 1/23/2019 4:56:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and compliment, Timothy.
Date: 1/16/2019 6:48:00 AM
Line, congrats on your win for this beautiful sonnet. John
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/16/2019 11:23:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, John.
Date: 1/15/2019 4:27:00 PM
Such a lovely 'beautiful sadness' Sonnet, Line. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/15/2019 7:26:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Sandra.
Date: 1/15/2019 3:47:00 PM
Line, congratulations on your win . Happy to see you have mastered Iambic Pentameter~
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Date: 1/15/2019 7:27:00 PM
Thank you, Constance. Mastered is a big word but I'll take the most appreciated compliment.
Date: 1/15/2019 12:54:00 PM
Oh- you conjured up a vivid picture of her in my mind! Congratulations on your success in the contest,Line. Wendy
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Date: 1/15/2019 7:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Wendy. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/15/2019 11:40:00 AM
Cascading aloft sweet midnight zephyr/ now there's a line you won't see elsewhere...amazing writing Line, congrats for placing in this very tough to judge contest!
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Date: 1/15/2019 7:24:00 PM
A most appreciated compliment and contest, John.
Date: 1/9/2019 2:54:00 PM
Very nice poem! Great imagery!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/9/2019 3:02:00 PM
Thanks, Valerie. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/9/2019 12:39:00 PM
WOW! Line your words flow like magic my friend, no need to be Judged I am giving you 1st place. lol
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/9/2019 1:47:00 PM
LOL you are too kind, Bobby. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/8/2019 9:27:00 PM
Exquisite my friend, no other words can describe how terrifically poignant and heartfelt it is. GL in the contest Line.
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Date: 1/8/2019 9:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
Date: 1/8/2019 3:29:00 PM
An enchanting write Line...GL in the contest..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/8/2019 3:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph. Most appreciated.
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