Moonlit Prayers

Lank shimmery hair flows off her shoulders
Cascading aloft sweet midnight zephyr
Alone she sits perched on seaside boulders
Under somber moonlight where he'd left her

Night after night she's at the rendezvous
Serene silhouette against the skyline
Amorously bidding her love adieu
Should by design the stars divine align

The twilight shadows hide the tears that flow
Deferring to cosmic powers that be
Prayers released beneath a live tableau
Akin lost mermaid lingering at sea

Love lost in surf leaving a soul in strife
Fate to reunite love in the next life



AP: 2nd place 2025

Submitted on May 13, 2019 for contest CHOICES (PHOTO #3) sponsored by SARA KENDRICK  - HONORABLE MENTION

and January 8, 2019 for contest BEAUTIFUL SADNESS sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON  -  RANKED 10TH
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Mcguire Avatar
January 22, 2019 at 11:46 PM
Beautiful! Missed this one, Wonderful
Gauthier Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 4:56 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and compliment, Timothy.
Gondolf Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 6:48 AM
Line, congrats on your win for this beautiful sonnet. John
Gauthier Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 11:23 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, John.
Haight Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 4:27 PM
Such a lovely 'beautiful sadness' Sonnet, Line. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 7:26 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Sandra.
La France Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 3:47 PM
Line, congratulations on your win . Happy to see you have mastered Iambic Pentameter~
Gauthier Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 7:27 PM
Thank you, Constance. Mastered is a big word but I'll take the most appreciated compliment.
Watson Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 12:54 PM
Oh- you conjured up a vivid picture of her in my mind! Congratulations on your success in the contest,Line. Wendy
Gauthier Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 7:28 PM
Thank you so much, Wendy. Most appreciated.
Hamilton Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 11:40 AM
Cascading aloft sweet midnight zephyr/ now there's a line you won't see elsewhere...amazing writing Line, congrats for placing in this very tough to judge contest!
Gauthier Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 7:24 PM
A most appreciated compliment and contest, John.
Staton Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 2:54 PM
Very nice poem! Great imagery!
Gauthier Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 3:02 PM
Thanks, Valerie. Most appreciated.
May Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 12:39 PM
WOW! Line your words flow like magic my friend, no need to be Judged I am giving you 1st place. lol
Gauthier Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 1:47 PM
LOL you are too kind, Bobby. Most appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 9:27 PM
Exquisite my friend, no other words can describe how terrifically poignant and heartfelt it is. GL in the contest Line.
Gauthier Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 9:33 PM
Thank you so much, Caren, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
May Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 3:29 PM
An enchanting write Line...GL in the contest..
Gauthier Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 3:55 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph. Most appreciated.
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