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Moonlit Journey of Love

Amidst the calmness of a starlit night, Two lovers begin a journey in their boat, Their bond grows stronger with each gentle stroke, As they sail through the water's peaceful light. The moon up high, a beacon of their love, Reflects upon the waves that gently sway, As they draw closer to each other's embrace, And share a moment so pure, thereof. Their craft becomes a haven from the world, Where they can be free to express their hearts, And cherish every moment they've unfurled, As the stars above bear witness to their parts. This scene of love that's painted with such grace, Is truly worthy of an artist's trace.

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Date: 4/27/2024 10:35:00 AM
Hello Aysha, A lovely romantic poem/ Enjoy y9ur day my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 2/26/2024 4:44:00 AM
How love unfurls on a boat makes an impression. Something I might think about whenever seeing a ship with sails. These images can linger in the minds of readers. They're hard to forget.
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Date: 10/2/2023 2:50:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your beautiful and romantic Journey, Aysha. John
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Date: 9/30/2023 6:30:00 AM
Ahhh!!! A great love story. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 9/20/2023 4:52:00 PM
what a charming sonnet Aysha I struggle writing romantic lines, your poem is truly beautiful:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/25/2023 3:34:00 PM
Very nice sonnet! Smooth romance reading. Have a nice time with best regards.
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Date: 2/22/2023 4:31:00 PM
Very nice. Dave
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Date: 2/22/2023 8:14:00 AM
This poem does capture moonlit love eith vivid imagery, Aysha, this is a scene of love and poetry in motion. Bravo!
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Date: 2/22/2023 6:00:00 AM
Nicely composed. I enjoyed. Blessings
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Date: 2/21/2023 5:09:00 PM
Aysha, this a REALLY lovely, descriptive, romantic sonnet. Janice
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Aysha Nuwas
Date: 2/21/2023 5:13:00 PM
That's so kind of you I really appreciate it.
Date: 2/21/2023 3:56:00 PM
A beautiful romantic Sonnet Aysha, and definitely written with grace… Belle
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Aysha Nuwas
Date: 2/21/2023 5:12:00 PM
Very kind, thank you.
Date: 2/21/2023 7:34:00 AM
The romantic, dreamy, moonlight journey was captivating and lovely, Aysha. :)
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Aysha Nuwas
Date: 2/21/2023 5:12:00 PM
Thank you :) :)
Date: 2/21/2023 4:11:00 AM
Certainly, Aysha, your poem is penned in a wonderful style. And the amazing metaphors you've used, together with your excellent diction, have brought another dimension of beauty to this sonnet. A lovely portrayal of a romantic situation, made all the more impressive by the delicacy in which it is presented.
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Aysha Nuwas
Date: 2/21/2023 5:12:00 PM
Very kind of you. Thanks
Date: 2/21/2023 4:06:00 AM
I love the content here, Aysha. It's against the rules to critique your sonnet. just remember the iambic pattern na Na na Na etc... I look forward to following your progress. Thank you for a lovely visit to my page:)
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Aysha Nuwas
Date: 2/21/2023 5:12:00 PM
I want to learn, if you wish, you can soupmail me any suggestions. Thank you so much.
Date: 2/21/2023 3:53:00 AM
You are an artist by your own right, your heart is beautiful. Take care, we are blessed and proud to be called writers, it comes from the one who created us, As I grow older, lol, I realize that yes it has aches and pains, but something very liberating about not caring so much what others think, sending love and prayers your way, Vienna
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Aysha Nuwas
Date: 2/21/2023 5:11:00 PM
Thank you Mystic Rose.
Date: 2/21/2023 2:16:00 AM
You write of lofty love, Aysha, romantic :)
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Aysha Nuwas
Date: 2/21/2023 5:10:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/20/2023 10:54:00 PM
This scene of love that's painted with such grace: what a lovely description. And indeed your poem is gracefully written. Well done.
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Aysha Nuwas
Date: 2/21/2023 5:10:00 PM
Thank you!

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