Moonlit Journey of Love

Amidst the calmness of a starlit night,
Two lovers begin a journey in their boat,
Their bond grows stronger with each gentle stroke,
As they sail through the water's peaceful light.

The moon up high, a beacon of their love,
Reflects upon the waves that gently sway,
As they draw closer to each other's embrace,
And share a moment so pure, thereof.

Their craft becomes a haven from the world,
Where they can be free to express their hearts,
And cherish every moment they've unfurled,
As the stars above bear witness to their parts.

This scene of love that's painted with such grace,
Is truly worthy of an artist's trace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Jones Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 2:20 AM
Delightfully romantic!
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 27, 2024 at 10:35 AM
Hello Aysha, A lovely romantic poem/ Enjoy y9ur day my friend. /Darlene/
Beaufort Avatar
February 26, 2024 at 4:44 AM
How love unfurls on a boat makes an impression. Something I might think about whenever seeing a ship with sails. These images can linger in the minds of readers. They're hard to forget.
Gondolf Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 2:50 AM
I enjoyed reading your beautiful and romantic Journey, Aysha. John
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 6:30 AM
Ahhh!!! A great love story. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Allison Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 4:52 PM
what a charming sonnet Aysha I struggle writing romantic lines, your poem is truly beautiful:-) hugs jan xx
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 3:34 PM
Very nice sonnet! Smooth romance reading. Have a nice time with best regards.
Cox Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 4:31 PM
Very nice. Dave
Eslinger Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 8:14 AM
This poem does capture moonlit love eith vivid imagery, Aysha, this is a scene of love and poetry in motion. Bravo!
Dutta Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 6:00 AM
Nicely composed. I enjoyed. Blessings
Canerdy Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:09 PM
Aysha, this a REALLY lovely, descriptive, romantic sonnet. Janice
Nuwas Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:13 PM
That's so kind of you I really appreciate it.
Edmonds  Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 3:56 PM
A beautiful romantic Sonnet Aysha, and definitely written with grace… Belle
Nuwas Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:12 PM
Very kind, thank you.
Buehler Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 7:34 AM
The romantic, dreamy, moonlight journey was captivating and lovely, Aysha. :)
Nuwas Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:12 PM
Thank you :) :)
Poet Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 4:11 AM
Certainly, Aysha, your poem is penned in a wonderful style. And the amazing metaphors you've used, together with your excellent diction, have brought another dimension of beauty to this sonnet. A lovely portrayal of a romantic situation, made all the more impressive by the delicacy in which it is presented.
Nuwas Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:12 PM
Very kind of you. Thanks
Turner Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 4:06 AM
I love the content here, Aysha. It's against the rules to critique your sonnet. just remember the iambic pattern na Na na Na etc... I look forward to following your progress. Thank you for a lovely visit to my page:)
Nuwas Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:12 PM
I want to learn, if you wish, you can soupmail me any suggestions. Thank you so much.
Rose  Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 3:53 AM
You are an artist by your own right, your heart is beautiful. Take care, we are blessed and proud to be called writers, it comes from the one who created us, As I grow older, lol, I realize that yes it has aches and pains, but something very liberating about not caring so much what others think, sending love and prayers your way, Vienna
Nuwas Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:11 PM
Thank you Mystic Rose.
Daniel Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 2:16 AM
You write of lofty love, Aysha, romantic :)
Nuwas Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:10 PM
Thank you!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 10:54 PM
This scene of love that's painted with such grace: what a lovely description. And indeed your poem is gracefully written. Well done.
Nuwas Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:10 PM
Thank you!
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