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Moonlight Sonata

Moonlight Sonata 
 
A mockingbird sings his nocturne, 
 Silhouetted against a sky of  velvet blue, 
Welcoming on the garden path 
 The Lady Claire de Lune 
Slipping from behind tall cypress trees, 
 Her creamy arms draped in shimmering shadows, 
Stretching slowly across the garden 
 To gently bathe the trumpet vines, announcing her return, 
In a gleaming signature of glowing white 
 While moonlights drip from feathery birch leaves 
Falling into ivory puddles 
 Of clearest light,
Splashing across the darkened lawn, 
 Then sit atop the ivy, tiptoeing up the fence - 
Eyes filled with reveries of shooting stars 
 And other summer skies, 
When Midnight enters this quiet refuge, 
 Returning from the daylight 
Dressed in veils of silver blue, 
 To wait upon this iridescent lady fair, 
Who lightly steps across sweet jasmine
 Dozing in the flowerbeds, 
Walking slowly in silent solitude together 
 Across the velvet sky -
To wax and wane as lovers living in a serenade 
 While polar stars spin and sway 
To the rhythm of their evensong 
 Till Midnight and the Lady slip away 
Before the world opens drowsy eyes 
 To catch them in the garden
On another summer night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 2/5/2020 4:41:00 PM
Wow Sam your imagery is so stunning, a delight to read on this moonlight night:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/5/2020 10:02:00 PM
Hi Jan, Thank you so much for your message and encouragement. I love thinking about you reading this piece by moonlight! So fun!
Date: 1/30/2020 3:01:00 PM
Your poet's mind works much like a camera, Sam, in the exactitude with which it paints a scene in words alone--congrats on your much deserved win!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/30/2020 4:09:00 PM
Hi L.J., Thank you for your always wonderful feedback. And yes, I have a detailed picture in mind when I write - a subscript scanning all of the details! You are so perceptive! Blessings my friend.
Date: 1/30/2020 2:55:00 PM
Hello Sam Kauffman, asI read this poem i felt i was in this scene of your poetry. Wow! Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/30/2020 5:12:00 PM
Hello Sam yes this poem makes me feel like i am there.I can close my eyes and feel like i am there. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/30/2020 4:06:00 PM
Hi Darlene! Thank so much for all of your kind words and your encouraging feedback! It is great to know that the words are able to put the reader in the scene!
Date: 1/30/2020 9:03:00 AM
beautifully expressed dear Sam, congrats on top win, well deserved! x:-)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/30/2020 11:05:00 AM
Thank you so much. This piece was written for moonlight in my garden - a sight I could look at for hours!

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