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For the Enchantment Through a Prism contest.

Mark Halliday
Enchantment through A Prism contest
24 December 2014

Soft moonlight
Reflects off my guitar
As I wait for you 'neath your window.
I spy your shadow silhouetted by a light.
Taking a deep breath, I start to sing and finger my guitar;
An air of unrequited love, and the sadness of life in the shadow.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/9/2015 8:34:00 AM
Shades of Glenn Miller. Your unrequited love is touched nicely in the, the guitar being such a sensitive sound. Love, daver
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/11/2015 7:14:00 AM
I was thinking more like a musical Cyrano De Bergerac. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 4/26/2015 5:02:00 PM
Mark, you are so sweet with the reply on the bottom. LINDA
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/11/2015 7:13:00 AM
Meant what I said.
Date: 1/1/2015 2:47:00 AM
Happy new year, Mark and congrats on he win
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Date: 12/30/2014 9:59:00 PM
I really like this Mark, congratulations on your win. All the best to you and yours in the New Year.
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Date: 12/30/2014 11:46:00 AM
Congrats on the win Mark and happy new year in advance...huggs
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Date: 12/30/2014 11:27:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Mark:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/25/2014 8:50:00 AM
Nice and lovely take on the theme of the contest, Merry Christmas, Mark
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 12/26/2014 12:25:00 PM
Thanks. Happy New Year!
Date: 12/25/2014 2:28:00 AM
Hi Mark this is brill loved it, merry xmas, thanks for your comments, all the best Poetowen
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 12/26/2014 12:26:00 PM
Thanks and your welcome. Happy New Year!
Date: 12/24/2014 9:58:00 PM
NOthing more painful than unrequited love..Very well expressed. Happy Holidays. BG
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 12/26/2014 12:27:00 PM
Thanks. Completely fabricated though. Happy New Year.
Date: 12/24/2014 7:32:00 PM
Well done, Mark. I can clearly picture these images and feel your sense of sadness. Merits a top rating. // paul
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 12/26/2014 12:28:00 PM
Thanks. Completely fiction though. Married since 1990. Happy New Year!
Date: 12/24/2014 7:07:00 PM
A Lovely Serenade, Mark,, Stopping by to say Hello, and Wish you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 12/26/2014 12:32:00 PM
Thanks. All the best for you and yours in 2015! Always enjoy your comments. We're in the middle of moving into a quaint old house we purchased. Not much of a Christmas (moved about 4 carloads of boxes and small items yesterday), but a great start for the new year.
Date: 12/24/2014 2:08:00 PM
such beautiful imagery Mark good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 12/24/2014 4:33:00 PM
Thanks Jan. It was fun.