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Moonlight on Meadows

you dismantled my wisteria-covered walls, unraveling my defenses like frayed silk... my nights are now painted with your kisses soft as twilight spilling across an oasis in an Arabian desert... I am lost in the reminiscence of your rays~ the taste of sunbeams sweet yet sharp citrus tantalizing my tongue ... the warmth lingering long after the moonlight on meadows that have faded... but beneath this bliss breathe a lagoon of lemonade lies where truth dissolves in the tang of deceit in the form of a mirage as the veil slips my exposed heart~ now bearing the embroidery of your poetry subtly sewn in demure damask hues~ feels each word as a poking plunge of the needle weaving through the fabric of my being binding me to the memories we’ve created... yet with every stitch, I wonder if I am adorned or undone~ whether this beautiful façade Is a gift or a curse, f o r e v e r trapped in this poisonous paradise...

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Date: 4/13/2025 12:39:00 PM
There's some excellent imagery here. That opening verse sparkles. Congratulations on your writing!
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Date: 4/12/2025 11:01:00 PM
Wow! What an enchanting, mesmerising write! Warmest congratulations on your win
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/13/2025 1:10:00 AM
Thank you kindly
Date: 4/12/2025 6:46:00 PM
wow, so much beauty in every line, congrats on your win :)
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/13/2025 1:10:00 AM
Thank you kindly. I'm so pleased to be placed amongst the winners
Date: 9/5/2024 5:35:00 AM
Dear billie, i love your approach to this and how youv interpreted the prompt. I see island prompt too of mine and i just must say, I absolutely love the imagery and wordplay and metaphors and how exquisitely youv woven words throughout in such a sensual and touching manner creating a very romantic yet aching ambience that emanates a poignant flow! You have a way with writing! O to be trapped in that poisonous paradise! So many emotions packed in this eloquent write! Congratulations on your win
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/13/2025 1:09:00 AM
Thank you kindly sis. Your support is something I always treasure.
Date: 8/23/2024 5:49:00 AM
Expertly written take on the theme. AlwAys the uncertainties...
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Billie Jama
Date: 8/28/2024 3:31:00 AM
Thank you kindly, I have edited it since you read it. It feels complete now

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