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Moonlight on Meadows

you dismantled my 
   wisteria-covered walls,
unraveling my defenses 
      like frayed silk...
my nights are now 
    painted with your kisses
soft as twilight spilling 
       across an oasis
          in an Arabian desert...

I am lost in the 
   reminiscence of your rays~
   the taste of sunbeams
  sweet yet sharp citrus 
       tantalizing my tongue ...
the warmth lingering
long after the moonlight 
   on meadows that have faded...

but beneath this bliss
breathe a 
    lagoon of lemonade lies
where truth dissolves
    in the tang of deceit
    in the form of a mirage

as the veil slips
    my exposed heart~
now  bearing the 
  embroidery of your poetry
subtly sewn in 
  demure damask hues~
feels each word
   as a poking plunge 
         of the needle
weaving through 
   the fabric of my being
binding me to 
  the memories we’ve created...

yet with every stitch,
I wonder if I am adorned 
     or undone~
whether this beautiful façade
Is a gift
    or a curse,
f o r e v e r
 trapped in 
this poisonous paradise...

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Date: 4/13/2025 12:39:00 PM
There's some excellent imagery here. That opening verse sparkles. Congratulations on your writing!
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Date: 4/12/2025 11:01:00 PM
Wow! What an enchanting, mesmerising write! Warmest congratulations on your win
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/13/2025 1:10:00 AM
Thank you kindly
Date: 4/12/2025 6:46:00 PM
wow, so much beauty in every line, congrats on your win :)
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/13/2025 1:10:00 AM
Thank you kindly. I'm so pleased to be placed amongst the winners
Date: 9/5/2024 5:35:00 AM
Dear billie, i love your approach to this and how youv interpreted the prompt. I see island prompt too of mine and i just must say, I absolutely love the imagery and wordplay and metaphors and how exquisitely youv woven words throughout in such a sensual and touching manner creating a very romantic yet aching ambience that emanates a poignant flow! You have a way with writing! O to be trapped in that poisonous paradise! So many emotions packed in this eloquent write! Congratulations on your win
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Billie Jama
Date: 4/13/2025 1:09:00 AM
Thank you kindly sis. Your support is something I always treasure.
Date: 8/23/2024 5:49:00 AM
Expertly written take on the theme. AlwAys the uncertainties...
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Billie Jama
Date: 8/28/2024 3:31:00 AM
Thank you kindly, I have edited it since you read it. It feels complete now

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