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Hard falls the dark night Sister moon ascends the heights Moonbeams filter through

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 4/25/2017 6:26:00 PM
A good Haiku on moonlight. It soothes the atmosphere.well written. Kindly review my works to
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Date: 12/4/2009 10:32:00 AM
beautiful...i've been thinking of trying a haiku ... love this
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Date: 11/27/2009 7:40:00 PM
Is this going into Raul's next contest? It should! Nice haiku, Audrey! By the way, more Soup Mail! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/26/2009 6:04:00 AM
Beautiful haiku Audrey and hope u entered this one in Raul's new contest ... its a winner... enjoy your T. Day and thankxxx for your loving comments on my poetry.. much appreciated and keep that creative pen of your flowing for us to enjoy.. blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/25/2009 9:04:00 PM
Lovely tribute to lunar beauty, Audrey! PS Soup Mail! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/23/2009 3:17:00 PM
Nicely done Haiku. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/23/2009 10:23:00 AM
Terrific Haiku Audrey, what a lovely image your words picture, and how i would love to see it >> James
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Date: 11/22/2009 5:52:00 PM
Really like the wording of this Haiku, Very good. Have not tried one of those yet but will soon. Looks like fun. Thank you for your encouraging words, Audrey. God bless.
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Date: 11/21/2009 12:41:00 PM
Beautiful ... Absolutely Beautiful... (of Course, I Love MoonBeams, its something so etheral about them to me (smile)... MoonBee
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Date: 11/21/2009 10:52:00 AM
Such a beautiful image you have created in this excellent haiku, Audrey. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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