Moonin'

Love at first sight is a familiar old phrase Dates back quite a way, still applies today When your boat gets jiggled Game over, you're trickled A matter of time afore you're moonin' away

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/30/2017 8:54:00 AM

It's why I close my eyes//when I exercise//down at the gym//while I get slim//so I don't get a love surprise. MOON HON O'JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/30/2017 11:05:00 AM

The danger persists throughout life... we MUST be strong!!! Unless one of these gorgeous creatures moons me! GAME OVER!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/30/2017 7:49:00 AM

Trickled? What a spontaneous word you have written there, quite the reflective and worshiped word! You have tickled my funny bone with this moonin' poem, such a glorious piece it is my friend! What a fine poem, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/30/2017 8:07:00 AM

Happy to hear my friend!!! Have a fantastic day!!!