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Moonbeam Dreams

The moon decided to hide one night So he slipped behind clouds in flight But twinkling stars were still there Sending out distant flares, When the clouds parted The moon started, To then gleam Moonbeam Dreams ~ 11-7-19 Rhyming Nonet Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Sandra Adams

Date: 11/17/2019 5:38:00 PM

this is beautiful, i too was confused on the rhyme scheme after writing a tri-rhyme i emailed the judge and then wrote a second one but my first i kept...good penning :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2019 12:14:00 PM

Too bad you had not known the rule, Joseph because your poem is terrific. (I only knew because I read his poem example and just followed how he did his own poem!) Congrats, Joseph.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/14/2019 8:37:00 PM

I love your entry Joseph. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/14/2019 1:01:00 PM

- Congratulations, Joseph :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 11/13/2019 8:13:00 PM

Joseph, this is an awesome write, my friend and fellow sponsor. Probably my fault for not specifying that all the last words had to rhyme. My apologies. That being said, I thought it was only fair to rank whom ever wrote theirs accordingly deserved a higher rank. Besides everything...a terrific write poetry brother. Congrats ~Charlie

Joseph May
Date: 11/14/2019 10:48:00 AM

Wish you had mentioned that it should be a monorhyme Charles, thank you for my placement..

Eve Roper

Date: 11/12/2019 1:59:00 PM

Our moon a lovely sight to even hide it for a moment a shame. Beautiful verse.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/11/2019 3:39:00 AM

- Beautiful, Joseph :) - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely Monday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/10/2019 1:35:00 PM

Hi Joseph your imagination in this poem is rife and your creativity well penned. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Silent One

Date: 11/10/2019 8:02:00 AM

You did this very well..The rhymes are great and you also created imagery in this restricted form..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2019 9:13:00 PM

wonderfully done, Joseph!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/8/2019 8:53:00 PM

The moon is playing hide and seek. I love everything about this. So cute and clever, very creative indeed. I shall place this in my favorites. I love soaring through the clouds, touching all the stars. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/8/2019 6:44:00 AM

A gorgeous write. Love it. Blessings, Gina

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/7/2019 4:33:00 PM

Loved the moonbeam dreams..lovely poem, Joseph.