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Moon Weed Night

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See the moon, shine so bright She teases me, into her light Smokey plumes, blur my sight Soon they clear, sheer delight She’s naked now, not uptight Together again, even stars alight A porcelain body, looks so right Try touch, can’t reach her height I grow some wings, taking flight In space, out of my mind tonight

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/13/2021 7:42:00 AM

Brilliant ...

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/13/2021 8:40:00 AM

Came back to earth like a lead balloon in the contest, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 8/10/2021 12:16:00 PM

2 sides to every Half Porcelain beauty Or The Dark Side

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/10/2021 2:08:00 PM

Yeah I reckon that moon has more than a dark side, I mean what the hell is it doing out there, other than it just happens to be there, cheers David

Gary Radice

Date: 8/10/2021 10:27:00 AM

Your words, David, add an atmosphere all of their own to the moon and a new meaning to the phrase high in the sky. Love it. Good luck in the competition. Cheers - Gary

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/10/2021 11:00:00 AM

Thanks Gary, Was it Bill Clinton said, I tried weed once but didn’t inhale, well I did and grew some wings, I reckon this is what might have gone through my head, cheers David

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/10/2021 2:29:00 AM

A wonderful moon-o-rhyme, David:)

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/10/2021 3:59:00 AM

Nice moon o rhyme Jo, I enjoyed the trip, was fun to write, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/9/2021 6:14:00 PM

A superb poem, David, Your language is flowing perfectly, and you produced beautiful images and excellent symbolism in your poetry about the moon. Best wishes for the contest.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/10/2021 1:00:00 AM

Thank you Lasaad was difficult to imagine the moon as a sex symbol, so introducing the weed opened up all doors, my imagination does the rest, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 8/9/2021 12:33:00 PM

I always think of the moon as female and your poem tends to agree with my thoughts - to my thoughts the only male moon is when a guy drops his trousers lol:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/9/2021 1:00:00 PM

Tut tut, yeah that is a male thing for some reason it’s all in the eye of the beholder, I almost used (upright) in my poem Jan, but didn’t want to give the wrong impression, cheers David

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/9/2021 12:12:00 PM

Hello David Kayangh, I sense that the moon is male. Because I refer to the full moon as The man In the Moon. Cheers! Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/9/2021 4:24:00 PM

Hello David Kavanagh, oh maybe your female moon is related to the mal moon where i live. just a thoj=ught. Cheers!!! Darlene

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/9/2021 1:03:00 PM

Yes indeed Darlene I remember that story from my childhood days, not to mention the cow jumping over the moon, but my moon is definitely female, cheers David