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Science Fiction Poetry Contest N/A

News is there is water ice on the darkest side of the moon, I wouldn’t drink it just yet, A gray dirt snow cone is what we’ll get! Sustaining the cislunar economy, or linking the moon to the Earth is everything. Our psyche thirsts for it, bursts of lunar power. Moon water made during the full moon or the new moon is most potent. Tapping into the Luna’s source by steeping it’s moonglaze, and underneath tomorrow’s “Ice Moon” it’ll be charged fully. We are seventy percent water. The moon affects earthly phenomena, like tides with its gravitational force. Our mental state changes with the moon’s phases. We absorb the Luna's positive aura. A rare thunderstorm on a full luminous orb, collects in a glass the energy of the moon directly under its glow. Charged by the moon’s energy, Energy so intense it moves oceans!

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Date: 2/6/2024 8:36:00 PM
"Ice moon" that charges our minds with an imaginative "what if." Anaya, your delightful, speculative lines on the moon's influence, its ability to hold our gaze + wonder make for grand pondering. Thank you for this intriguing poem. All the best, Brian
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Date: 2/7/2024 8:55:00 AM
All those things the ice moon brings. Thank you for your warm comment, Brian!
Date: 1/29/2024 11:54:00 AM
It is amazing what power the moon has since it has the gravitational pull on the earth and water upon it. Thanks for sharing this information with us in the form of poetry. Sara K
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Date: 2/5/2024 1:43:00 PM
Thank you for commenting my sci-fi/NASA informed and part recipe for Moonwater poem, Sara!
Date: 1/26/2024 11:52:00 AM
There are times I believe there could be water on the dark side of the moon. Great SF.
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Date: 1/27/2024 11:50:00 AM
NASA is where I get informed, Victor. Trust me! ha Thank you!
Date: 1/25/2024 12:08:00 PM
Your poem is a captivating exploration of the moon's multifaceted significance, blending scientific inquiry with poetic imagination to illuminate the wonders of the lunar realm and its enduring fascination for humanity.. Loved it..
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Date: 1/26/2024 10:50:00 AM
Thank you for sharing, Silent One. Delighted you enjoyed! :)
Date: 1/25/2024 12:06:00 PM
Water, water, every where,. Nor any drop to drink. Yes there is water at the moon’s poles, frozen inside craters, I’m sure we will harvest and filter it at some point in the future, so poetic your last four lines, they move oceans indeed! Great one for contest, cheers David
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Date: 1/26/2024 10:50:00 AM
Thank you, David!
Date: 1/25/2024 8:04:00 AM
So far away…so close to affectation!
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Date: 1/25/2024 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 1/25/2024 5:28:00 AM
I love the title. And I like poetry that informs. Nice job
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Date: 1/25/2024 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 1/25/2024 2:30:00 AM
Quite a clever write blasting with moon beams everywhere capturing my mind right into the galaxy of wonder.
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Date: 1/25/2024 9:24:00 AM
Thank you, Yolanda!
Date: 1/24/2024 9:06:00 PM
Nice entry for the contest, Anaya. Very creative poetry, my friend. Good luck! Bill
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Date: 1/25/2024 8:16:00 AM
Thank you, Bill!
Date: 1/24/2024 7:06:00 PM
I am Anaya, your poem is quite enchanting! Your words build a cosmic tale, capturing the essence of moonwater and its mystical influence on us. The imagery of a "gray dirt snow cone" and the moon's energy moving oceans is vivid and resonates deeply. Blessings Daniel
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Date: 1/25/2024 8:14:00 AM
Daniel, I enjoyed reading your post. Thank you for your review, I appreciate it!
Date: 1/24/2024 6:30:00 PM
And they say science and poetry don't mix. You certainly have proved them wrong. Fantastic entry to the contest.
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Date: 1/25/2024 8:13:00 AM
Thank you, Jerry! Love your review.

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