Moon Spoon Haiku

Peas on a soup spoon
Bend back when no one's looking
Aim high for the moon


(Entry for "moon spoon" contest)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Daniel Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 3:48 AM
Love the cute turn you took this theme to :) congratulations, Mark:)
Martin Avatar
December 28, 2016 at 2:12 PM
Thanks Jo! :-)
Canerdy Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 12:12 PM
Whimsical--but deep! I like it, Mark. Janice
Martin Avatar
December 26, 2016 at 12:16 PM
Thanks Janice! :-)
Kundu Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 9:39 AM
Hilarious! Good luck, Mark!
Martin Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 9:41 AM
Thanks Tamal! :-)
Dietrich Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 7:38 PM
This is really cute. Just like a guy to try this!!
Martin Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 9:42 AM
Too true. We never really grow up :-)
Hoffman Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 7:26 PM
This is cute and clever; good luck in the contest Mark!:)
Martin Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 9:41 AM
Thanks Cheryl! :-)
La France Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 7:12 PM
Mark, this is so funny!
Martin Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 8:17 AM
Thanks Broken Wings! I like to keep in touch with my inner child ;-)
Vinson Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 9:45 PM
Ha! : ) Bravo, Mark, Seven!
Martin Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 1:41 AM
Thanks Doug! :-)
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