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Moon Spoon Haiku

Peas on a soup spoon
Bend back when no one's looking
Aim high for the moon


(Entry for "moon spoon" contest)

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/28/2016 3:48:00 AM

Love the cute turn you took this theme to :) congratulations, Mark:)

Mark Martin
Date: 12/28/2016 2:12:00 PM

Thanks Jo! :-)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/26/2016 12:12:00 PM

Whimsical--but deep! I like it, Mark. Janice

Mark Martin
Date: 12/26/2016 12:16:00 PM

Thanks Janice! :-)

Tamal Kundu

Date: 12/23/2016 9:39:00 AM

Hilarious! Good luck, Mark!

Mark Martin
Date: 12/23/2016 9:41:00 AM

Thanks Tamal! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2016 7:38:00 PM

This is really cute. Just like a guy to try this!!

Mark Martin
Date: 12/23/2016 9:42:00 AM

Too true. We never really grow up :-)

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 12/22/2016 7:26:00 PM

This is cute and clever; good luck in the contest Mark!:)

Mark Martin
Date: 12/23/2016 9:41:00 AM

Thanks Cheryl! :-)

Constance La France

Date: 12/20/2016 7:12:00 PM

Mark, this is so funny!

Mark Martin
Date: 12/21/2016 8:17:00 AM

Thanks Broken Wings! I like to keep in touch with my inner child ;-)

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/19/2016 9:45:00 PM

Ha! : ) Bravo, Mark, Seven!

Mark Martin
Date: 12/20/2016 1:41:00 AM

Thanks Doug! :-)

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