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Moon Spoon

L I K Musing upon M Y , savouring each silky S O--O--N, O N \p/ O Cheerfully my children chomp pieces of pastry with pomp... n t dreams of deep delight. t a s I wipe away wisps of white d i ----------------------- 21.12.16

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Charlie Smith

Date: 12/29/2016 10:04:00 AM

Congratulations Jo, quite creative...

Afzal Nusker

Date: 12/28/2016 6:58:00 AM

This is so wonderful, Jo. Congratulations!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/27/2016 7:43:00 PM

A creative marvel you have penned Jo. Congratulations on your first placement! ; ) 7

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/27/2016 7:01:00 PM

Very creative, Jo! Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2016 5:11:00 PM

I loved this the first time I saw it, Jo. BIG congrats for a great win.

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/27/2016 2:02:00 PM

The richness of imagination made full, Jo. Cheers! : )

Mark Martin

Date: 12/27/2016 12:20:00 PM

Like the shapes! Congrats! :-)

Paul Callus

Date: 12/27/2016 11:46:00 AM

Impressive creativity, Jo! Congratulations on placing first:) Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2016 10:56:00 AM

Very good, Jo, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/27/2016 10:20:00 AM

Congrats!!! Jo...excellant my friend...god bless...^WW^

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/27/2016 9:51:00 AM

I am impressed by your artistry. Congratulations on your 1st placement.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/27/2016 8:47:00 AM

Wonderful, Jo! Congrats!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/27/2016 8:05:00 AM

A imaginative take on the theme with a beautiful message and a very creative outlay. Congratulations, Kai

Joanna Daniel
Date: 12/28/2016 3:58:00 AM

Thank you, Kai:) unexpected but satisfying win:) all glory be to God:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2016 7:59:00 PM

so very imaginative, Jo. Wow.!!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/22/2016 2:29:00 PM

very creative Jo and i like the clever alliteration:-) hugs jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 12/21/2016 9:00:00 AM

You have kids? I would have never guessed. It is different, I'll say that. Lol Good luck, Jo and merry Christmas:)

Joanna Daniel
Date: 12/22/2016 4:22:00 AM

Oh no Daniel !! the third line says that it is a 'distant dream':) thank you for your kind wishes, and thanks to Buddy too:)

Probir Gupta

Date: 12/21/2016 7:49:00 AM

Very nice ...

Chris Green

Date: 12/21/2016 5:56:00 AM

Very creative and wonderful expressed. Good luck in the contest Jo.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/21/2016 3:59:00 AM

jo, you ran the extra mile to create a verse marvelous as this moon song!..huggs