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with outstretched hand I scoop the full moon as it floats on the horizon... a wish trickles between my fingers --------------------------------------- Contest: Moon Spoon [A Three Liner] Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann Placed 3rd

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/19/2017 10:18:00 PM

Wow Paul, an enticing and enchanting write with such vivid and animated imagery that lives and breathes as I read your poem... I love this quality in your poetry, it's amazing! A well-deserved congrats on your contest win!! Warm wishes to you my friend!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/21/2017 3:16:00 PM

Fortunately we all have different styles of writing and varied ways of expressing ourselves, Susan. That is why we tend, even more, to appreciate poems written by others. Thank you for your lovely critique. ~ Warm regards // paul

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 1/1/2017 11:47:00 AM

Nice and interesting piece...Congrats on your win....

Paul Callus
Date: 1/1/2017 3:31:00 PM

Thank you, Olusegun. Happy new year! // paul

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/29/2016 10:06:00 AM

Great piece Paul, congratulations...

Paul Callus
Date: 12/29/2016 11:20:00 AM

Thank you, Charlie. Sending you best wishes for 2017....paul

Jean Murray

Date: 12/28/2016 4:07:00 PM

Lovely Paul. Well done.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/29/2016 7:00:00 AM

Thank you, Jean. I'll grab this opportunity to wish you all the very best for 2017:) Regards // paul

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/28/2016 3:50:00 AM

Wow! This one is a first place winner for me, Paul:) you are simply amazing with these short forms:) congratulations:) a 10:)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/28/2016 11:43:00 AM

Thank you for your generosity, Jo. I read many lovely winning entries, and I must congratulate you once again for claiming top spot:) Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/27/2016 8:02:00 PM

As you know Paul,your entry was one of my very favorites! Congratulations on your win! : ) 7

Paul Callus
Date: 12/28/2016 12:06:00 PM

Thank you for coming back with congrats, Connie:) Your constant encouragement is sincerely appreciated. God bless. // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/27/2016 6:56:00 PM

Powerful imagery, Paul. Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 12/28/2016 11:34:00 AM

Thank you, Sandra. I was pleased to see you hugging the top spot:) Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2016 5:21:00 PM

this for me was one of the very best. Simply outstanding, Paul, Congrats on the list.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/28/2016 11:30:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea; you are too kind:) Regards // paul

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/27/2016 1:36:00 PM

Beautiful, Paul, and true for young and old.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/27/2016 1:43:00 PM

Thank you, Doug. Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2016 11:04:00 AM

Back to congratulate you, Paul, hugs Eve

Paul Callus
Date: 12/27/2016 12:42:00 PM

That's very kind of you to pay a second visit, Eve...thank you! Hugs // paul

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/27/2016 10:30:00 AM

Congrats!!! Paul...should have placed higher...god bless...^WW^

Paul Callus
Date: 12/27/2016 12:40:00 PM

Thank you WW...you are too kind:) Regards // paul

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/27/2016 10:05:00 AM

Yes, your words go perfectly with your image. Congratulations on your placement.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/27/2016 12:30:00 PM

Thank you Dane Ann. I enjoyed your winning entry, too. Regards // paul

Deborah Burch

Date: 12/27/2016 9:37:00 AM

Congratulations Paul!!! I knew this would do well!!! Big Hugggs!! Well done!! Deb

Paul Callus
Date: 12/27/2016 12:29:00 PM

Thank you for coming back, Deborah! Visitors with pleasant words and a lovely smile are always welcome:):) Hugs // paul

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/27/2016 8:15:00 AM

I like this very much. Congratulation Pau. Many moon wishes, Kai

Paul Callus
Date: 12/27/2016 9:24:00 AM

Many thanks for including me in your winners' list, Kai. I'll go look up the results. Best regards to you for the new year 2017. // paul

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/27/2016 8:16:00 AM

Paul!!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/24/2016 1:30:00 AM

These short poems are your forte Paul! Not everyone can write them well, but you really excel. I will look for this on top the winner's list. Mele Kalikimaka my friend. 7 ; D

Paul Callus
Date: 12/25/2016 12:57:00 PM

Thank you very much, Connie; your encouragement is much appreciated. Mele Kalikimaka :) Warm regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/24/2016 12:51:00 AM

Great three lines Paul. Merry Christmas.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/25/2016 12:42:00 PM

Thank you Richard. I hope you are having a lovely Christmas. Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 12/23/2016 8:04:00 PM

Wow,,,, now this is one fantastic verse... a winner already Hugs and Merry Christmas

Paul Callus
Date: 12/25/2016 12:43:00 PM

That wow says it all, Eve...thank you! Merry Christmas to you, too. Hugs // paul

David Mohn

Date: 12/23/2016 6:24:00 PM

such a tactile treasure Paul...a gem and a winner I'm sure

Paul Callus
Date: 12/25/2016 1:02:00 PM

You are too kind, David:) Thank you. Best regards ... paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2016 7:33:00 PM

wow, this is outstanding work. Almost like a haiku!!

Paul Callus
Date: 12/23/2016 8:29:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. In fact I was going to write a haiku, but being a 3 liner I took advantage of the possibility of using unlimited words/syllables. Regards ~ paul

Pashang Salehi

Date: 12/21/2016 2:23:00 PM

Beautiful... Good luck... Merry Christmas and happy new year... Pashang

Paul Callus
Date: 12/22/2016 1:26:00 PM

Many thanks, Pashang. May your Christmas be merry; all the best for 2017. // paul

Deborah Burch

Date: 12/20/2016 11:37:00 PM

Breathtaking... well done,Paul. I really like what you have conveyed... or my interpretation there of. ;) Hugggs. Deb

Paul Callus
Date: 12/21/2016 12:04:00 PM

Considering your positive comments, I am sure your interpretation is an excellent one, Deborah:) Thank you! Hugs // paul

Joseph May

Date: 12/20/2016 10:16:00 PM

The last line is a gem...Well done Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 12/21/2016 12:32:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph; I'm relying on that final line to redeem myself:)) Regards // paul