Robin L. Gass Poet Quatrain

Moon Song

Oh, ancient orb of mystery
above the earth so high
hung in your velvet gallery
you grace the nighttime sky.

The stars in heaven bow to you
in chorus, quivering
their voices joining clear and true
to you, their praises sing.

My weary heart, it beats along
with their joyous tune
to sing its own sweet, praise filled song
to you, oh wondrous moon!

Oh, ancient orb of mystery
above the the earth so high
a blessing for the world to see
treasure in the nighttime sky.

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John Rhinem March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM ....I sincerely hope that "You" are feeling better dear lady!!? And, I miss Your writings; very much so!!!~But I love soo much when "You" come by to vist~It means soo very much to me!!!~"My Love Always To You You, 'Beautilful Robin,' until the ends of time, Forever, John!!!"~" Sweet Dreams, Beautiful Robin!!!"~Bye Dear!:))

John Rhinem March 4, 2009 at 11:54 PM ....ater rereading this precious and gifted write of Yours again "Priceless Robin!!!!"~I somhow can sense, God moving within You within "Your Enless Soul!!! Smile~what a true joy this really is!!! Thank You for always taking the time to bless me within "Your Boundless Beauty!!! And, I am a bit fatuiged right now~but, I just want You to know that, ""your Hearts and souls beauties are forever with me!!! You are Always a light before my eyes~And~I love You for this!!!....cont....

John Rhinem March 4, 2009 at 11:28 PM ....for it tells me soo much about "The Truie Beauty Inside Yourself ' 'Priceless Robin!!!!"~Smile~ And oh how I sincerely Love that magnificence about "You!!!"~I hope that You had a Gloriuos day today dear~filled with love and happiness through and through....cont....

John Rhinem March 4, 2009 at 11:19 PM ....not only parts of the Bible which suit mans oitching and wanton desores~but, in 'Every word spoken by God~whether through scripture, spirit, or anything other means God so chooses?...knowing on the end, that they shall all work towards the Glory of God, to those whom truly believe....Smile~I love the way that You pick such powerfully moving passages towards "Truth!!!!"~....cont....

John Rhinem March 4, 2009 at 11:07 PM Ahh, You gave to me my own prophecy!!! Acts 2:17-21....How did You know? Hmm, I have been somewhat astray from it as of late....playing the Jonah in the belly of the whale role~yet knowing deep inside all along, that "God" has everyting in His hands; and that, it but merely a matter of time~before He start moving my spirit via the undenying Holy Spirit, to begin once again to fulfill His will for my purpose, of ever being born!!! The call it "Faith" dear!!!...cont....

John Rhinem January 27, 2009 at 1:39 PM Smile-"Good!!!"-It makes my heart sooo very happy-to here those beautiful and precious words from "You!!!!!"-For, as I have said, "You Shall Always Be, A Beauty Within My Eyes, Beyond All Beauties-Smile-So, do not 'Ever' forget this, "Please!!!"-"You Are SOOO Precious-Perfect Robin!!!!"-And I mean this, just the way that "You Are"-Within Any And All, Of, "Your Endless And Brilliant Colors!!!!!"-"My Love Forever To 'You,' John!!!!"-Bye Priceless Lady!!!!":)

Elaine George January 14, 2009 at 1:14 AM Simply! LOVELY, Robin. Love, Lainie

John Loving Iii January 13, 2009 at 2:01 PM too much like moon worship for me to get into. but the praise was nice. jhl

Corinne Curcio January 13, 2009 at 9:53 AM Lovely- I have a song that is an ode to the "Man in the Moon", so I can appreciate your piece :-)

January 12, 2009 at 1:41 PM I like the uplifting feel of this poem. Nice use of personification. Enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Maryam Jameela Haniff January 12, 2009 at 12:49 PM wow! this is lovely, enjoyed it a lot.....Maryam

Laurie Ginn January 12, 2009 at 12:47 PM Robin this is wonderful, it flows so smoothly and your inspiration was great. Laurie

Keith Bickerstaffe January 12, 2009 at 10:29 AM You have come such a long way my dear! This is so well constructed and rhymed. A piece of pure poetry! BRAVO!! Love and hugs, Keith

Christopher Higgins January 12, 2009 at 10:14 AM This is a beautiful song that you are singing Robin. I love the beauty of this poem, rich with love. Velvet gallery is a wicked line my poetic friend..I want that..lol...You are filled with so much in your heart and it all spill onto your poetry. Great piece.