Moon River Child

to sneak outside, into the gentle beauty of evening when all others are asleep, except for nocturnal hawks like me, I wander along the river's shore, in the twirling, dappled prism of waves, pebbles and buds, thrown across the grass by the skyline flickering through wind-tossed crowns of trees-- a rare sensation as though I were walking on a gossamer mantle of water : it's true, i love the taste of nightbreak softly caressing the glossy lacquer of summer tide-- a fragrant pewter, compared to the coppery sting of blistering daytime, that when my eyes inhale the grace offered by peeping clouds, is to be filled with a song of moonlight waltzing with the sea-breeze in a dance fest. Oh, sneaking outside in the near dusk hours has been a rite of mine since i was a child... and till now it beholds me, this magical pageant that began at age eight when from nowhere , a relay of stars and a new moon carried me out the gate and beyond this world-- if only to bestow upon me a mystical tour connecting heaven's light with waters blue. Water And Sky Contest of Gregory R. Barden Re-posted 1/5/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 1/25/2018 1:57:00 PM
Delightful and lovely, nette. Congratulations on your win! ...Fran
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Date: 1/25/2018 1:17:00 PM
Beautiful, nette. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 1/24/2018 10:45:00 AM
Wonderful imagery! A rhythmic eloquent treat to read :) congratulations on your win! xomo
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Date: 1/24/2018 7:14:00 AM
beautiful Nette, loved every word..congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/24/2018 6:01:00 AM
I have had a similar relationship and tradition of spending nights with the moon, Nette, sometimes sitting on the beach and watching it go from one horizon to another, with no boredom whatsoever. Gorgeous write throughout ... blessings and congrats on your NINTH PLACE! Thank you so much for entering my contest! :-)
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Date: 8/7/2013 6:59:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/6/2013 3:16:00 PM
Congratulations Nette: I love your connection with Nature and the grounding it gave has carried you far. SuZ
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Date: 8/6/2013 2:35:00 PM
this is fantastic, Nette. BIg congrats . It's one of my favorites in this contest.
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Date: 8/6/2013 8:03:00 AM
Oh nette.....me too......lovely...congratulations....
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:12:00 PM
Congratulations on a very fine and well-deserved win, Nette! Love, Annalise
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:53:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations!!! ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:07:00 AM
Nette, ... Congratulations in Richard's "Girl Rising." contest.... always *LINDA
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Date: 8/5/2013 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations and thank you for entering this lovely poem.
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Date: 8/5/2013 7:55:00 AM
You still haven't explained the small I.
Date: 7/21/2013 9:25:00 AM
WOW! This is amazing and very beautiful. I am sure it will do good in the contest. Thanks for sharing......... Lucilla
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Date: 7/20/2013 5:35:00 PM
I would love if you would consider entering a poem in My Girl Rising contest. You have a eloquent spirit and I would love for you to speak on this important topic.
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Date: 7/20/2013 5:21:00 PM
This is so good Nette, absolutly love the texture of your words. Why the small i ???
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Date: 7/20/2013 11:32:00 AM
this sounds like me. I love it! well written :)
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Date: 7/20/2013 9:54:00 AM
yes, I can relate to this one - beautiful write, nette
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Date: 7/19/2013 9:19:00 PM
I am a nightwalker as well my friend! I love the night, the pristine coolness of the wispy rain slowly misting onto me! The dim glow of the white moon passing down onto my grateful form! Oh I'm getting into a poem here....but you see my entrancement that I have with the evening/night hours! We are similar that way Nette! I loved reading this amazing poem here this evening!(note evening :)) What a brilliant piece, you have done very magnificently with this poem!! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/19/2013 8:20:00 PM
The evening and night are both very pensive and enchanting moments for me. This poem is very close to my heart. Very lovely and well expressed. Always, Laura
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Date: 7/19/2013 4:40:00 PM
This is like a magical story of wonders..You make the night seem so beautiful dear
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Date: 7/19/2013 4:29:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative starlite night time ritual..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
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Date: 7/19/2013 2:11:00 PM
An enthralling mix of serenity, playfulness, & innocence. This captured me so well.
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Date: 7/19/2013 2:01:00 PM
Excellent poem dazzling with your magical words Nette!Lovely read.
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Date: 7/19/2013 12:52:00 PM
- When the night has come and you've said good night .... you shall be in your bed .... like all nice girls .... - Nice to read, thanks! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :))
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