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Moon Motet

Moon faces Keeper,
How long must you leave me here,
forlorn in earth's sea?







for Haiku contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/29/2010 7:33:00 PM
This paints quite an image of the moon's forlorness, Robert, something I like to write about too from time to time. I really enjoyed this one. Luv, Andrea ps. I told connie about you. She is on this site now too and I hope you will read her poems, connie marcum wong!
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Date: 1/4/2010 5:41:00 PM
Congrats Robert!! Great vivid imagery captured...I can see it in my mind! Wonderful haiku! Thanks so much for sharing and for always taking the time to read my writes. Many thanks too for your kind comments and words of encouragement. All is truly appreciated! have a blessed evening~Mary p.s. you have soup mail
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Date: 12/19/2009 2:39:00 AM
Congratulations Robert, on your success in Raul’s Reflections contest. You are a winner "everywhere"! Keep up the great work. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/14/2009 6:50:00 PM
I like this alot I love haiku and the moon nice!!
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Date: 12/11/2009 2:46:00 AM
Nice haiku congratulations on having in featured on the hot list.
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Date: 12/9/2009 7:10:00 PM
Wow what a unique strong Haiku! Laura :)
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Date: 12/8/2009 1:23:00 AM
cream of the crop good! And thanks! Susan J. Mills
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Date: 12/7/2009 5:20:00 AM
A lovely Haiku! Great imagery! Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Reflections" Contest! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/3/2009 2:15:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL,Robert. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 12/2/2009 7:38:00 PM
I really liked how you approached your haiku in question form, very unique and it did make me wonder as well--how long, indeed? Congratulations on your win, Robert :) & thanks for the wonderful greetings on my haiku :) Enjoy your day!
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Date: 12/2/2009 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations, Robert! This is exactly what the picture depicted! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/2/2009 1:49:00 PM
I love this interesting take on Raul's photo. Congratulations on your win, and thank you so much for your kind comments! ~Juliane
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Date: 12/2/2009 12:00:00 PM
This is so different. congrats on your win in the contest. Well done. BG
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Date: 12/2/2009 9:57:00 AM
Robert, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your win in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 12/2/2009 7:53:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Robert.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/2/2009 5:07:00 AM
Congrats, Robert, on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. well deserved win.. blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetie"
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Date: 12/2/2009 3:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/2/2009 2:48:00 AM
Robert, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 12/1/2009 5:22:00 PM
Dear Robert, I'm glad YOU finally decided to try a Haiku and a Superb Haiku it is Good Luck in Raul's Contest I see winner in YOUR future YOUR POETIC Friend...HG
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:18:00 PM
Interesting perspective on the topic. Nice use of personification. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 12/1/2009 3:52:00 AM
I can see the reflection now, Good job....RdP
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Date: 11/30/2009 3:50:00 PM
Robert.. what a beautiful entry and haiku for the contest.. just beautiful emotion from the moon.. wonderful parlay of words moon to God... luv it .. favorite tonight... thankxxx for your warm and always inspiring comments on my poetry... blessings.... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetie"
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Date: 11/29/2009 6:28:00 PM
enjoyed reading today, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/29/2009 4:03:00 PM
You have soup mail.
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Date: 11/29/2009 12:52:00 PM
Lovely haiku, Robert. Best of luck in the contest! Hugs, Donna
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