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Moon Glow Ride On Torch Lake

Steering our boat across the moon glow
Like a fork stabbed through cream
We careen in the sheen of upside down light at 3:30 A.M.

The July night tries to close on us like a lid

The result of one too many martinis
By dad at Dockside						Shhhhhhh

Let it go
The bow parting the Milky Way				Shhhhhhh

Startling the Whitefish					Weightless

Them and us
Life vests free of bodies
The kids in their early 20s					Passengers wondering

How they had gone through life
Never feeling the sweat of the moon
On their skin like this
Until now, their dad their uncle her husband
He has something left to offer them all

Grinning
Like any secret boat owner still alive on a big lake.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/4/2019 8:41:00 AM
I'm with Sunshine Smile...love the bow parting the milky way in your lovely poem.
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Robert Trezise Jr.
Date: 10/4/2019 11:55:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 10/4/2019 7:32:00 AM
- "The bow parting the Milky Way" ... lovely ... - A beautiful poem, Robert :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Robert Trezise Jr.
Date: 10/4/2019 7:47:00 AM
You made my day thank you.

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