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Moon and Clouds

Moon wants to shed his bright light on the dark world but selfish, lustful clouds come, blanket moon fully. Moon escapes from their clutches and smiles But this freedom is short. Soon another set of clouds come and blanket him again. Moon frees himself once more. This goes on till clouds end. Moon is determined to give light. He walks out of clouds again and again. He keeps moving whole night reaching opposite side by morn. When clouds cover the moon partly, he looks pretty When moon smiles at his freedom and achievement, he is full of joy and bliss, Shining
25.05.2021 Heptastich Poetry Form, syllables 2,4,6,8,6,4,2 Submitted to: Heptastich contest Sponsor : William Kekaula

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Date: 5/25/2021 3:32:00 PM
Hello Rama, whenthe clouds covers the moon , the moon is not seen. I like the pitch black sky the best because the moon can be seen. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/26/2021 11:06:00 AM
Hello Rama, yes that is beautiful as well. Enjoy your day my friend. God Bless.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 5/26/2021 8:50:00 AM
I agree. I also like it when clouds partially cover moon or when a thin layer of moon is seen on top of clouds. You too enjoy your evening. Take care, God bless!

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