Moon

Moon A beautiful rock very close by. When you look up it hits your eye. It pull’s on the waters around the world. Creating waves and tides that memorise One side it will always hide where darkness rides The side you see will always be facing you with dignity Lots of creatures great and small depend on its all Next time you look up be happy to see the rock of Earths clock

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Heidi Sands

Date: 5/10/2017 10:45:00 AM

Nice one and interesting write ! :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/10/2017 11:28:00 AM

Hi Heidi , thanks for comment , ::))) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/9/2017 2:14:00 PM

- Very nice to think that we all have the same moon ... we all share the moon - Great written, Niall :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/9/2017 4:55:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise , thank you , same moon and we share the same soup :))HUGS

Darren White

Date: 5/9/2017 12:19:00 PM

My friend Space Cadet once wrote a little poem for me, telling me that there is a little rabbit on the moon, if you look at it on one side :) I loved that very much. Beautiful poem Niall.

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/9/2017 4:58:00 PM

Hi Darren , good one , thanks for comment my friend :))

Akkina Downing

Date: 5/8/2017 6:48:00 PM

I'm always wondering what would it feel like to touch it... Lol! Nice bright moon, Niall :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/8/2017 7:07:00 PM

Hi Akkina , I have been told that I am wired to the moon,,,lol ,,, It would be nice to touch and hug :)))

Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/8/2017 12:45:00 AM

Well, tonight the moon is in the sign of libra :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/8/2017 11:23:00 AM

Hi Debbie , I hope it brings you great joy:))hugs

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/7/2017 3:41:00 PM

I'll check if Its shining bright tonight..How lovely this is...I do love the moon.Btw..thanks for your encouraging comments on my posts :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 5/7/2017 4:52:00 PM

Hi Charmaine , My pleasure you are a through natural poet easy for me to enjoy my pleasure and thank you so much for all your encouraging comments :)) hugs