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Moon-2

MOON Black holes forbid orbits Stay where you are You single minded singer Full blown blob of my predilection Would find your circuitous centre Thoughts defy gravity Following the law of most resistance You could be damp and silent For the ultimate moan Within this lecherous night Beyond all motion, all other moons So what? Here’s the groan Of your forbidden light hurtling past the futile tracts Of spent words Guess what. In the deep rapids To sink with the singing moon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/2/2013 9:51:00 PM
I love space Jag, mostly i love the imagery here... deep like space and the sinking moon.... Linda
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Date: 4/23/2013 3:34:00 PM
amazing poetry Jag, so profound,,,,
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Date: 4/21/2013 2:07:00 PM
you get deeper by the day...superb use of vocab, you have such a unique way of putting things jaggy, is it for a contest? bc if it is and I was the judge I would place it super high :)
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Date: 4/21/2013 10:33:00 AM
Perfect. Allegories are illusive enough to entice an empathetic curiosity.
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