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10.09.2026

Anne-Lise Andresen
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THE SIMPLE POETRY Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

2nd place in the contest

 

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- Moon -

                                                       The sailing moon of the night
                                                       captivating with dazzling glow
                                                  Clouds are adorned with silver lining
                                               The light and movement create sensuality

                                                    Apply shimmer to the mossy carpet
                                                                    under my feet
                                                              - the silence merged
                                                           reinforces one's presence

                                                          Breathing deeply and calmly
                                                               just listening inward
                                                             into my own existence
                                                                and consciousness

                                                         This precious beauty is lifted
                                                        I am grateful that I can witness
                                                          such a peaceful experience
                                                       - inextricably linked with nature
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 17, 2026 at 4:51 PM
outstanding, Anne-Lise! Your poem was totally engaging and a great contest entry, faving.
Poet Avatar
September 16, 2026 at 3:19 AM
Your lovely poem beautifully captures the serene and mesmerizing essence of a moonlit night, Anne-Lise. The imagery of the moon's glow and the silver-lined clouds paints a vivid picture, and the reflection on nature evokes a sense of inner peace and gratitude. Excellent Job
Kendrick Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 4:43 AM
I enjoyed reading this one, Anne-Lise. I enjoyed the accompanying artwork as well. I like the way you described your feelings and captivation by seeing the full moon. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Way to go. 👏✍️. Sara K.
Crandall Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 7:58 PM
Beautiful - I guess if you want to commune with nature, you can just go outside and look at the moon...I think I'll do that now. Uhoh, I don't see it - maybe it's not up yet!
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 5:27 PM
Your words are witness to how captivating the moon can be. 🌙 Congrats also on your win
Goldsmith Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 1:11 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Moon" write. I love this pretty picture. Wish I had it. Great Ending... Hugs... Have a blessed weekend with your wonderful win...............
Buehler Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 3:25 PM
There 's nothing like a beautiful, moonlit night, and your breathtaking poem took me there! Lovely images! Best wishes for the contest. 😊 🌙 hugs
Kerr Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 10:11 AM
This work has left a lasting impression on me, Anne-Lise. It radiates warmth, haunting imagery and lyricism. Superb descriptions.🔥🔥🔥 Wamth and light, Howard
George Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 9:40 PM
So beautiful..... Reading your poem and seeing the image, I feel lost in a magical night when moon sends down radiance. All the best in the contest. Love and hugs~ :)
DiMino Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 12:24 PM
"Breathing deeply and calmly just listening inward into my own existence and consciousness" Wow, wonderfully perceptive! Well said. Glorious reflection!
Sands Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 10:37 AM
Beautiful poem with important gratitude! Very nice :)
Rodgers Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 5:19 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, I love the shift from watching the moon high up in the sky straight down to the feeling of wet moss under bare feet. I also like that it doesn't overthink the moment or try too hard to be grand, it just captures that rare, peaceful second where you feel totally plugged into the night. Beautifully done. Blessings, Daniel
Jones Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 4:44 AM
Wonderfully written with vivid imagery. You will do well in the contest! 😊
Sharma  Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 4:33 AM
Awwwn the ineffable and inevitable link with nature ~ love this so much! As a moon dreamer and admirer I truly felt the soothe in your words, absolutely gorgeous throughout and also how you've written ~ "Breathing deeply and calmly just listening inward into my own existence and consciousness" Ahh how soulfully serene ✨ 🤌 pleasure reading your words always, sweet Anne-Lise, keep writinnn and shininnnn, hugszzz ~ 💫 🧚 🌙 (ps, check your soupmail)
Sharma  Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 10:18 AM
Awwwn great! 🥰🩷🍂💫 yes soup sometimes has glitches.. no worries my friend ~ hugsz and love
Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 6:03 AM
- I have read your S-mail ... but the soup won't let me reply - Everything is ok, thank you very much :) ❤️ - hugs
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