Moon

Waned moon's crescent child hoping to one day soon shine full Full moon wanes its light gentles dark night Earth's children sleep October 17, 2021 Lune (Mixed Pair) Poetry Contest sponsored by William Kekaula Second Place Trophy!

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Ann Peck

Date: 11/14/2021 12:19:00 PM

Thanks, Regina! It is mysterious as some now claim it's hollow. Still beautiful, though.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/29/2021 10:16:00 AM

Ann, delightful as silver moonlight as it caresses sleepers! Wonderful images. I can feel the peacefulness of a moonlit night in your words! Congratulations on your win!

Ann Peck
Date: 10/29/2021 3:00:00 PM

Thank you, Sam. I think nothing is more peaceful than a moonlit night.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 10/29/2021 9:13:00 AM

Beautiful~and congratulations on your win! Blessings, Paulette

Ann Peck
Date: 10/31/2021 9:08:00 AM

Dear Paulette, Thank you so much for comments and for blessing!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/28/2021 10:24:00 PM

Wonderful lune. Moon in its greatness. Congratulations!

Ann Peck
Date: 10/31/2021 9:13:00 AM

Thank you so much, Alex! I'm honored by your comments!

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/28/2021 7:23:00 PM

Dear Ann, your precious pen spills such beauty. An exquisite poem full of hope and soothing dreams. Amazing imagery! Congratulations for your excellent win in William’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Ann Peck
Date: 10/31/2021 9:10:00 AM

Dear Susan, Thank you. You are so kind and generous.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/28/2021 11:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your lovely "Moon" win. Have a blessed autumn day.................

Jan Allison

Date: 10/28/2021 5:15:00 AM

Such wonderful interplay between moon and child this is a joy to read, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Peck
Date: 10/31/2021 9:18:00 AM

Dear Jan, You're so kind. Thank you! BTW: For the Alphabet contest, Webster refused my X word, so I gave up at 11:30pm and then spent all the next morning looking for one. Not so easy :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 10/28/2021 4:20:00 AM

Ann, this is by far, the most beautiful Lune entry my friend, my compliments for your righteous endeavor and placement, Aloha!

Ann Peck
Date: 10/28/2021 9:07:00 AM

Dear William, Thank you so much for honoring my poem with second place! I'm thrilled! And thank you for your very kind words. Your contest was interesting and fun to enter! Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/18/2021 1:27:00 PM

Really nice Ann. Love the interplay between the moon and the image of the child. Best wishes for the contest.

Ann Peck
Date: 10/21/2021 9:16:00 AM

Thank you, Sam. I appreciate your comments.